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7/2/20, 10:04 AM
> Absman do you run a patreon or something? > No, but I've considered it in the past. I don't write fast enough to make it worth it for members.
Evan
7/2/20, 9:00 AM
Fantastic work! Thanks for writing this. It had a lot of depth, great writing, and hot as hell. A few twists thrown in. Awesome.
Anonymous
7/2/20, 7:50 AM
Such a hot read and so well written! Thanks for the story
7/2/20, 7:01 AM
Lovely story. Add some more weight gain and maybe make him want to become fatter.
Jun 28, 2020
7/2/20, 6:55 AM
this was really nice
Anonymous
7/2/20, 6:53 AM
Hahah holy fuck what an amazing read. Super hot and extremely witty. Well done!
7/2/20, 6:48 AM
God, that was so hot! One of the best stories I've read on this site, I feel like that hit so many of my buttons perfectly! I loved the whole Dr Manhattan vibe of Reggie, and it was such a smart choice to have Reggie be the sex god instead of Sid, since Sid can benefit from all the great parts of the abilities without the responsibilities or consequences of gaining deity-level powers. Can't wait to read the next few parts, incredible work!
7/2/20, 6:42 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments! @Heru Kane, thanks for reading and expressing your feelings and frustrations about Jeff's character. I would say there are in-world reasons for the fact that the frat's initiation process is basically unfair. Several characters recognise this. Eventually, there will probably be different endings each representing a different sense of 'victory' over the frat and its initiation process. Jeff started out as a blank slate back in series one; he could develop differently in other branches. Making him submissive naturally creates a conflict between his desires and his goal of joining the frat and I feel it adds interesting layers to the narrative.
7/2/20, 4:03 AM
The story's hot and I love the fast pace! Conversion is so hot and more details wood be nice. Keep going, write more!
7/2/20, 3:56 AM
Pull my plug out, I'm ready Daddy! Great follow-up, I want to read more!