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7/2/20, 6:42 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments! @Heru Kane, thanks for reading and expressing your feelings and frustrations about Jeff's character. I would say there are in-world reasons for the fact that the frat's initiation process is basically unfair. Several characters recognise this. Eventually, there will probably be different endings each representing a different sense of 'victory' over the frat and its initiation process. Jeff started out as a blank slate back in series one; he could develop differently in other branches. Making him submissive naturally creates a conflict between his desires and his goal of joining the frat and I feel it adds interesting layers to the narrative.
7/2/20, 4:03 AM
The story's hot and I love the fast pace! Conversion is so hot and more details wood be nice. Keep going, write more!
7/2/20, 3:56 AM
Pull my plug out, I'm ready Daddy! Great follow-up, I want to read more!
7/2/20, 3:55 AM
Love the pov of the 'Frat Daddy', so yeah very cool. (Oh to be that man with my own stable of frat boys!) I also liked how he was quite dismissive of the girls, and the sexuality of the frat, as he made them his. Very sexy on that. The reality change stuff is very interesting to me, especially lately, so that is quite fun. PS. It totally needs some Frat Daddy rimming good boy. :)
7/2/20, 3:47 AM
Great storyline. I want to be part of that frat and bend over for Frat Daddy! Keep the story going!
7/2/20, 3:18 AM
Love this so much! Is there going to be a sequel or spinoff to Christian's debasement? Or even just a new story with similiar themes? Would love to see more of your work.
7/2/20, 2:10 AM
I kind of wish that becoming hit by the serum didn't automatically remove one's ability to join the frat, or that maybe there wasn't just one frat participating but a bunch and at the end it will depend on a number of factors that will showcase whether one is admitted or not. Or that maybe a single failure doesn't remove one from the running. Or maybe something like harems, though I guess they would call them something else, could be formed with a dom and a bunch of subs around him. But, mostly, I wish the main character we were following in this branching storyline didn't have such subby tendencies. Side paths, sure, but what seems like the main path, no, its a bit frustrating. Especially, like I said, it doesn't really make his victory a victory. Since there is every chance that at some point he will just give in to his nature and submit, therefore foregoing membership in the frat. Which, in and of itself, doesn't make sense, as I said, since one shouldn't automatically be removed from being able to get in due to such thing. This said, the dad thing is kind of hot, wondering what that is all about. As is the idea of adding more rimming.
7/2/20, 1:51 AM
One of my favorite stories on the whole site. You did a fantastic job with this. Just so unbelievably
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7/2/20, 1:29 AM
I'm glad that you decided to finish this story. The ending is awesome! Thanks for your hard work. I cant wait to see what you come up with next.
7/2/20, 1:07 AM
This is exciting and fresh. As Nutiper said, amazing world building. I really am excited to see where you take this. Very creative. Please continue!