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7/2/20, 3:55 AM
Love the pov of the 'Frat Daddy', so yeah very cool. (Oh to be that man with my own stable of frat boys!) I also liked how he was quite dismissive of the girls, and the sexuality of the frat, as he made them his. Very sexy on that. The reality change stuff is very interesting to me, especially lately, so that is quite fun. PS. It totally needs some Frat Daddy rimming good boy. :)
7/2/20, 3:47 AM
Great storyline. I want to be part of that frat and bend over for Frat Daddy! Keep the story going!
7/2/20, 3:18 AM
Love this so much! Is there going to be a sequel or spinoff to Christian's debasement? Or even just a new story with similiar themes? Would love to see more of your work.
7/2/20, 2:10 AM
I kind of wish that becoming hit by the serum didn't automatically remove one's ability to join the frat, or that maybe there wasn't just one frat participating but a bunch and at the end it will depend on a number of factors that will showcase whether one is admitted or not. Or that maybe a single failure doesn't remove one from the running. Or maybe something like harems, though I guess they would call them something else, could be formed with a dom and a bunch of subs around him. But, mostly, I wish the main character we were following in this branching storyline didn't have such subby tendencies. Side paths, sure, but what seems like the main path, no, its a bit frustrating. Especially, like I said, it doesn't really make his victory a victory. Since there is every chance that at some point he will just give in to his nature and submit, therefore foregoing membership in the frat. Which, in and of itself, doesn't make sense, as I said, since one shouldn't automatically be removed from being able to get in due to such thing. This said, the dad thing is kind of hot, wondering what that is all about. As is the idea of adding more rimming.
7/2/20, 1:51 AM
One of my favorite stories on the whole site. You did a fantastic job with this. Just so unbelievably
M
7/2/20, 1:29 AM
I'm glad that you decided to finish this story. The ending is awesome! Thanks for your hard work. I cant wait to see what you come up with next.
7/2/20, 1:07 AM
This is exciting and fresh. As Nutiper said, amazing world building. I really am excited to see where you take this. Very creative. Please continue!
7/2/20, 12:44 AM
A very creative fantasy story with such a hot encounter between Jacob and Lyle. Would love to read more!
Nutiper
7/1/20, 11:01 PM
Oh, lovely. Really fun worldbuilding, and the scene between Jacob and Lyle is *hot*, and now I'm wondering what else about his cock (and ass!) Jacob is going to discover, if you decide to continue this with further chapters... Curious to see if ingesting Jacob's cum has any side-effects that only show up later... Also curious to see if his cock ever *does* go down...
7/1/20, 10:16 PM
So great to hear so much feedback! Congrats to Varlance on a job well done, too. @Martin, I would definitely love to see more people explore writing different pathways on this series. It's my dream that someday this series can live up to the amount of branching pathways that each chapter conclusion promises. I encourage everybody who's interested to let your imagination be your guide, and feel free to contact either of us if you have any questions. And here's a reminder to any loyal readers who want to contribute a part but don't feel confident in their writing abilities: I'm currently open to commissions for new chapters of Ass Assassin (Rounds 1 and 2)! Is there an unwritten story path you'd like to see developed? Do you really want to see Jeff and co defeated and dominated in one way in particular? Get in touch with me through my patreon or through the GSS discord to discuss your idea. Standard rate is $30 for a failure ending commission and $50 for a non-failure ending story branch. Help make this series grow!