Recent Comments

7/1/20, 10:16 PM
So great to hear so much feedback! Congrats to Varlance on a job well done, too. @Martin, I would definitely love to see more people explore writing different pathways on this series. It's my dream that someday this series can live up to the amount of branching pathways that each chapter conclusion promises. I encourage everybody who's interested to let your imagination be your guide, and feel free to contact either of us if you have any questions. And here's a reminder to any loyal readers who want to contribute a part but don't feel confident in their writing abilities: I'm currently open to commissions for new chapters of Ass Assassin (Rounds 1 and 2)! Is there an unwritten story path you'd like to see developed? Do you really want to see Jeff and co defeated and dominated in one way in particular? Get in touch with me through my patreon or through the GSS discord to discuss your idea. Standard rate is $30 for a failure ending commission and $50 for a non-failure ending story branch. Help make this series grow!
Anonymous
7/1/20, 9:51 PM
Definitely agree with the comment about the pacing! I love your writing style and it’s a hot concept, but this feels like we’ve just seen 2 or 3 chapters condensed down into one
7/1/20, 8:55 PM
When we see him, I wonder how public spirited the Chief really is? You see, the people I worry about are the younger gay guys held in detention, do they get proper gay sex education and career advice? You'd have to start with DT and the basics of course, but eventually move up to full-on chem sex and self fisting. And it's always important that guys are shown how to make a really good living, when they get outside.
Boston Satyr
7/1/20, 6:54 PM
some ideas: It'd be fun to see Weiss & Duncan investigate a crime, go on a caper, have an adventure together. While they're investigating, it gives you an opportunity to introduce new characters, explore the town, and see how all these changes to mens' bodies & minds have manifested. & pplenty of sex along the way!
7/1/20, 6:08 PM
@Martin: Thanks for letting me know. I wasnt sure and i was concerned it would appear redundant, but given the way the site is structured, this looks better.
7/1/20, 6:00 PM
@BobbyBlobfish: Thank you very much for the comment and for the support. For me authors like wishibone blue and Hypnocigarboy create stories with a unique world; I'm just trying to expand their world. I read their work and questions come out (for Bargain it was what happened to the four detective and how would they spread Ari'seth's control to other cops). I'm always glad that people like the way I expand upon their work. I do have unique story ideas of my own, but these stories follow an idea I first encountered in Yo-Yo Ma's Inspired by Bach series: Can't some of us complete existing ideas well? That's what I try to do and I'm glad that you like it.
7/1/20, 5:22 PM
yeah this is actually hella cute, need more
Clarity
7/1/20, 5:21 PM
Yess these next chapters are gonna be so hot! The kinkier the better!!
giveintothemusk
7/1/20, 4:49 PM
Sensational as always
Anonymous
7/1/20, 4:46 PM
Damn such a hot story! Cant wait to see more stories with shoe and muscle theft!!