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6/30/20, 11:09 PM
Thanks for writing this. It's excellent.
Slave Abdamelek
6/30/20, 10:56 PM
David S: Thank you so much for following this, and for your feedback. Rest assured that it is building up to something, and maybe you'll smile that you didn't see one or two of the twists coming ;)
6/30/20, 10:27 PM
I love the plot, the ideas, the writing... and I love a good prolonged story! But be careful prolonging one plot point too long. To be honest, the plot climax I hope you are building is elusive to me at the moment. As in, I'm not sure what you're building up to anymore. Maybe I need to go back and read the whole thing again... Or maybe you're doing that intentionally... And if you are doing it intentionally, you damn well better not suddenly end this with "and then they all died and everything was fine." :-)
Mdlftr
6/30/20, 10:13 PM
Chilling build up to this story ---- "...Coach. The bear had sat himself on the weight bench I had been using, and motioned to the men holding me. Face burning in shame and fury, I screamed as I was placed over coaches knees. Mikey himself held my hands down, eyes downcast. “Sorry mate, this is for your own good. You’ll understand.” He smiled as if it was a good thing. “Coach will make you better, you’ll see.” He was right. Of course, then I didn’t appreciate it; that day I swore at Mikey, at Coach, at every man in the room. I don’t think I would have stopped if Coach hadn’t stopped me by roughly yanking down my gym shorts and the boxers below. I was unable to speak I felt so shocked, so violated! Then Coach raised his hand back and gave my arse an almighty smack. The sound rang out, reverberating around the silent room. Again, he struck me, this time on the other cheek. My face burned in pain and shame, but I couldn’t move as his hand came down again and again. Fourteen spanks he gave me, one for each day I’d been at Gymbox on each cheek. He stood up and I half tumbled, half rolled to the floor at his boots, by shorts and underwear still down at my knees. “I said, give me fifty. ..." ================================== The spectacle of a grown man being spanked (!) on his bare butt - how humiliating! This is a major mind f**k!
Mdlftr
6/30/20, 9:55 PM
Interesting start. Andy seems intelligent, articulate, enthusiastic and well centered. WHY do I think that's all about to change? Hmmmmm?
6/30/20, 9:50 PM
yes loved the story, i think that as part of his outreach, Officer Madison needs to visit his minster so he can be enlightened
Anonymous
6/30/20, 9:40 PM
echt geweldig 🥰
Mdlftr
6/30/20, 9:21 PM
Masterful writing from Absman420: Kenny realized it then. The big lug in front of him WAS different than he had been that morning. He’d become stupid. How he’d lucked out on that body was anybody’s guess—obviously, the big guy wasn’t gonna be able to tell him—(Maybe whatever made him this freaky big also robbed him of his brain.)—whatever. For whatever reason, he’d turned to Kenny. And Kenny—who’d had this fantasy before—had always known what he’d do if presented with this situation. Kenny’d give the orders. ================ "He'd become stupid. ---- Kenny'd give the orders" Chilling!
6/30/20, 9:16 PM
Fantastic story I wish I met Sebastian when I divorced my pig of an ex wife I'd gladly have let Sebastian take me and make me his 😋😋
6/30/20, 9:01 PM
Fantastic! Give us more!