Recent Comments

7/1/20, 2:18 AM
Truly, unexpectedly beautiful writing. A little masterpiece.
7/1/20, 2:08 AM
Wow!!! I'm flattered to have someone take my idea and go a different way. I'm impressed with the work; there are things I see I can borrow from to improve my work in general. I have an guess about who the author may be, but let me just say the story has my vote for the competition. Let's see if it can win.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/1/20, 1:50 AM
I like it very much! Where is this shop located?
7/1/20, 12:32 AM
Very hot to see it get to this level of intensity! Plus I'm a big fan of dick fixation.
6/30/20, 11:37 PM
this is a really fun ride! cant wait for the next part.
Officer Boner
6/30/20, 11:31 PM
fuck! what a rush! you called me 'officer' 6 times while I was reading this. I've exposed myself in public mixing girly and butch clothing and your story made me felt the same burning exiting thrill and shame I feel with the laughs and dirty words I hear on my little excursions. it's so fuckinh hot. Some cop should be urinated on his shoes or boots, or inside them. i've passed for both and its humiliating and exciting
Tangananica
6/30/20, 11:16 PM
this is terrible!!!! now i have to wait until next chapter to know what happened!!! great job btw.
6/30/20, 11:09 PM
Thanks for writing this. It's excellent.
Slave Abdamelek
6/30/20, 10:56 PM
David S: Thank you so much for following this, and for your feedback. Rest assured that it is building up to something, and maybe you'll smile that you didn't see one or two of the twists coming ;)
6/30/20, 10:27 PM
I love the plot, the ideas, the writing... and I love a good prolonged story! But be careful prolonging one plot point too long. To be honest, the plot climax I hope you are building is elusive to me at the moment. As in, I'm not sure what you're building up to anymore. Maybe I need to go back and read the whole thing again... Or maybe you're doing that intentionally... And if you are doing it intentionally, you damn well better not suddenly end this with "and then they all died and everything was fine." :-)