Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/30/20, 6:59 PM
I love this story a lot and have been eagerly awaiting new chapters. You're a fantastic writer! I do agree with above that a backstory would be helpful. As the changes become more real and more permanent, I think the tone becomes darker since the cops haven't done anything particularly heinous to warrant such severe changes. Personally, that sits a little funny with me but everyone has different tolerance levels. Having said that, I can't wait to see where you decide to take the story. Keep up the good work!
6/30/20, 6:13 PM
Fantastic Master your new fan here please more stories like this thank you Master
Anonymous
6/30/20, 5:37 PM
Oh god Onix I miss your story so much.
6/30/20, 5:33 PM
Greetings Master great story I'm squishing reading it 😎 please Master could I be a fan love your stories I sent you an email
6/30/20, 5:27 PM
Nachos is the kinda guy you'd be lucky to know IRL. He's so wholesome. *huggles*
6/30/20, 5:16 PM
Equally hot and amusing!
6/30/20, 5:07 PM
Wow! This chapter was so incredibly hot! I love the fact that Jeffrey is clearly submissive and wants to get fucked hard but he keeps fighting and resisting that instinct so he can get into K.O.K. This is awesome. I can't wait to see him getting fucked again soon by a hunky frat boy or pledge - seems that it has been a while since Jeffrey got a good hard pounding. Hope the tests in Round 3 involves even more sex, including some rimming! I'd love a scene of some hunk eating out Jeffrey's tight hole. You guys have been doing an amazing job in this, thanks so much for this series! I can't wait for Round 3! Please post it soon!
6/30/20, 4:49 PM
I'm so proud of Dave. He is trying to be a better person for his soulmate. I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/30/20, 4:33 PM
Excellent Master wish that was me Sir 💚💛💚
6/30/20, 3:53 PM
Really interesting take on New Guy in Town's take on Bargain. I loved it. I think it would be cool to see you continue this as a parallel work. I think Bargain is one of the best stories on here and really wish Wishbone would complete it. So, I'm happy to see it continued in different directions by different authors. Well done and please continue!