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6/29/20, 4:15 PM
Super hot. This idea could go far.
Blufman1
6/29/20, 4:09 PM
everything I love in a story
dfwname
6/29/20, 4:00 PM
Nice - Colton's life is about to change...
6/29/20, 3:57 PM
This a great concept and very hot. I hope you continue on it someday. Maybe the uncle will make a visit or phone call to help with exposition about the mirror and help the guys cope.
6/29/20, 3:10 PM
needs a part 2
Anonymous
6/29/20, 2:53 PM
"I’m interested about that second point - do you mean that the master in this chapter basically changed him in an unsustainable way (like how is the punk going to react to all these changes when Campbell gets back to the station?)" Yes. This. I suppose, the punk being a punk, didn't think through so carefully that someone else could become the master of the cop (even if the cop is, as per his definition, now a slut to serve society's worst). Or, perhaps the punk actually really doesn't care whether some lowlife homeless sex worker takes full advantage of Campbell. Anyway, it was just my two cents. I still overall enjoyed the chapter. :)
Anonymous
6/29/20, 2:22 PM
I'll be reading the follow-up chapters, for sure.
nycboot
6/29/20, 1:40 PM
Whoa! Welcome Onix! You wrote that story when you were 19? Gads...amazing! One can definitely say that, just as Gino/Damien put a spell on the gift boxes, so too you've put a spell on some of us readers. Thank you!!
6/29/20, 12:42 PM
I liked it -- kept me hard throughout the whole transformation! Well done.
6/29/20, 12:41 PM
You're now one of my favorite authors here. Thank you for this wonderful piece. Please continue this series. I hope that on the next chapter, We will see a very submissive slave chief in the making!