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6/29/20, 3:57 PM
This a great concept and very hot. I hope you continue on it someday. Maybe the uncle will make a visit or phone call to help with exposition about the mirror and help the guys cope.
6/29/20, 3:10 PM
needs a part 2
Anonymous
6/29/20, 2:53 PM
"I’m interested about that second point - do you mean that the master in this chapter basically changed him in an unsustainable way (like how is the punk going to react to all these changes when Campbell gets back to the station?)" Yes. This. I suppose, the punk being a punk, didn't think through so carefully that someone else could become the master of the cop (even if the cop is, as per his definition, now a slut to serve society's worst). Or, perhaps the punk actually really doesn't care whether some lowlife homeless sex worker takes full advantage of Campbell. Anyway, it was just my two cents. I still overall enjoyed the chapter. :)
Anonymous
6/29/20, 2:22 PM
I'll be reading the follow-up chapters, for sure.
nycboot
6/29/20, 1:40 PM
Whoa! Welcome Onix! You wrote that story when you were 19? Gads...amazing! One can definitely say that, just as Gino/Damien put a spell on the gift boxes, so too you've put a spell on some of us readers. Thank you!!
6/29/20, 12:42 PM
I liked it -- kept me hard throughout the whole transformation! Well done.
6/29/20, 12:41 PM
You're now one of my favorite authors here. Thank you for this wonderful piece. Please continue this series. I hope that on the next chapter, We will see a very submissive slave chief in the making!
Anonymous
6/29/20, 12:31 PM
Please do another part like this!
6/29/20, 11:16 AM
Aww okay, I see what you mean... I'm the complete opposite and I love those scenes because they fall into the realm of real life consequences with lasting 'damage' . In terms of sexual debasement, my favorite stories involve a lot of exhibitionism or public humiliation too so I guess the financial domination stuff was an extension of that I'm interested about that second point - do you mean that the master in this chapter basically changed him in an unsustainable way (like how is the punk going to react to all these changes when Campbell gets back to the station?) or do you mean that Campbell's inner monologue doesn't match up with the personality the punk ingrained in him at the station?
Anonymous
6/29/20, 11:05 AM
I felt a bit prudish reading the parts about the ring and the credit cards and atm/cash. As in, perhaps similar to Hall above, I felt it was a bit much. That's just my individual (seemingly arbitrary) line that was crossed. The overall story concept of mind-fucked cops is still great. I think I just prefer the humiliation, obliviousness, and self-debasement sex-based (like in the previous chapters). Also, feel like the degree to which Campbell was brought down (by the punk basically re-configuring him) may have put a bit of a plot hole. Anyway, I still love the concept of the overall story and can't wait for the chapter with the muscle bull Chief. Thank you, GoodTime!