Recent Comments

6/29/20, 9:24 PM
Such a sweet story! I like how Dave tries to be a better person for Nate.
6/29/20, 9:14 PM
Lol...I'm starting to think that Edlam has subliminals written into his stories that gets us all cluelessly conditioned to become hooked on them, and then leaves us all hanging desperately and craving for more...all at his whim! Are we all part of a bigger plot you're playing out here, Edlam? Haha! ;-) In all seriousness, you're putting some great work, so all the wait is definitely worth it! Keep it up sir!
Martin
6/29/20, 8:35 PM
I really like this story - but on a different level than most of the other stories here on GSS. It's just a lovely story to read. Thank you for sharing this with us!
6/29/20, 7:57 PM
LeadPB, I dig the Skyrim reference. Thank you to the rest who left a comment. I'm really glad you like the story :)
Anonymous
6/29/20, 7:08 PM
Terrific
Mdlftr
6/29/20, 6:12 PM
I read this story years ago, when it first came out. I remember loving the fact that there was a cross pollination between Gino (who changed in another ONIX series) and Damien, who is always trouble! The muscle growth scenes were amazing - I always appreciated the positive changes to the characters' bodies. I'll admit that dumbing down and feminizing aren't big favorites of mine, but I skip those parts for the entertaining way the stories unfold. Cool to hear that ONIX is a real life bodybuilder (275 pounds!) along with Absman420. I, like every other male in the late 20th and 21st centuries also lift and enjoy the results. I'd love the magical size, but not the dumbing down! I'm looking forward to reading Absman420's contribution. P.S. My two favorite Absman420 stories are "Milkman" and "The Healer". I LOVE the instantaneous healing of a badly torn shoulder! If ONLY that could happen in real life! Write, on, men!
6/29/20, 5:38 PM
This story remains one of my favorites, particularly in the way that Jeffrey’s own submissive nature keeps betraying him. I can’t wait to see more variations (and failures) within this chapter, not to mention what happens in Round 3.
6/29/20, 5:27 PM
Nicely put together.
Corinthian
6/29/20, 4:52 PM
One of the best I've read in a long time. I had to jerk off and cum after he'd been whored out - many thanks. So many possibilities.....
6/29/20, 4:15 PM
Super hot. This idea could go far.