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Mdlftr
6/29/20, 6:12 PM
I read this story years ago, when it first came out. I remember loving the fact that there was a cross pollination between Gino (who changed in another ONIX series) and Damien, who is always trouble! The muscle growth scenes were amazing - I always appreciated the positive changes to the characters' bodies. I'll admit that dumbing down and feminizing aren't big favorites of mine, but I skip those parts for the entertaining way the stories unfold. Cool to hear that ONIX is a real life bodybuilder (275 pounds!) along with Absman420. I, like every other male in the late 20th and 21st centuries also lift and enjoy the results. I'd love the magical size, but not the dumbing down! I'm looking forward to reading Absman420's contribution. P.S. My two favorite Absman420 stories are "Milkman" and "The Healer". I LOVE the instantaneous healing of a badly torn shoulder! If ONLY that could happen in real life! Write, on, men!
6/29/20, 5:38 PM
This story remains one of my favorites, particularly in the way that Jeffrey’s own submissive nature keeps betraying him. I can’t wait to see more variations (and failures) within this chapter, not to mention what happens in Round 3.
6/29/20, 5:27 PM
Nicely put together.
Corinthian
6/29/20, 4:52 PM
One of the best I've read in a long time. I had to jerk off and cum after he'd been whored out - many thanks. So many possibilities.....
6/29/20, 4:15 PM
Super hot. This idea could go far.
Blufman1
6/29/20, 4:09 PM
everything I love in a story
dfwname
6/29/20, 4:00 PM
Nice - Colton's life is about to change...
6/29/20, 3:57 PM
This a great concept and very hot. I hope you continue on it someday. Maybe the uncle will make a visit or phone call to help with exposition about the mirror and help the guys cope.
6/29/20, 3:10 PM
needs a part 2
Anonymous
6/29/20, 2:53 PM
"I’m interested about that second point - do you mean that the master in this chapter basically changed him in an unsustainable way (like how is the punk going to react to all these changes when Campbell gets back to the station?)" Yes. This. I suppose, the punk being a punk, didn't think through so carefully that someone else could become the master of the cop (even if the cop is, as per his definition, now a slut to serve society's worst). Or, perhaps the punk actually really doesn't care whether some lowlife homeless sex worker takes full advantage of Campbell. Anyway, it was just my two cents. I still overall enjoyed the chapter. :)