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6/29/20, 12:42 PM
I liked it -- kept me hard throughout the whole transformation! Well done.
6/29/20, 12:41 PM
You're now one of my favorite authors here. Thank you for this wonderful piece. Please continue this series. I hope that on the next chapter, We will see a very submissive slave chief in the making!
Anonymous
6/29/20, 12:31 PM
Please do another part like this!
6/29/20, 11:16 AM
Aww okay, I see what you mean... I'm the complete opposite and I love those scenes because they fall into the realm of real life consequences with lasting 'damage' . In terms of sexual debasement, my favorite stories involve a lot of exhibitionism or public humiliation too so I guess the financial domination stuff was an extension of that I'm interested about that second point - do you mean that the master in this chapter basically changed him in an unsustainable way (like how is the punk going to react to all these changes when Campbell gets back to the station?) or do you mean that Campbell's inner monologue doesn't match up with the personality the punk ingrained in him at the station?
Anonymous
6/29/20, 11:05 AM
I felt a bit prudish reading the parts about the ring and the credit cards and atm/cash. As in, perhaps similar to Hall above, I felt it was a bit much. That's just my individual (seemingly arbitrary) line that was crossed. The overall story concept of mind-fucked cops is still great. I think I just prefer the humiliation, obliviousness, and self-debasement sex-based (like in the previous chapters). Also, feel like the degree to which Campbell was brought down (by the punk basically re-configuring him) may have put a bit of a plot hole. Anyway, I still love the concept of the overall story and can't wait for the chapter with the muscle bull Chief. Thank you, GoodTime!
6/29/20, 10:58 AM
Nice, so when you come back to this story we will see more of the city, also take your time and do the stuff you want, just don't let the quality drop you are very good
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/29/20, 10:57 AM
Nice to read about beastiality once in a while. Great job!
6/29/20, 10:10 AM
haha Look at us, we're the Mutual Admiration Society! I started writing these stories before I knew that the secret to bodybuilding is perseverance. Even steroids aren't some magic bullet -- you still gotta put the time in. As I've gotten older, my stories have become more about rejuvenation or masculine spirit (hyper-masculine spirit haha). As for ADDICTED TO STUDD, I should have known you'd love that -- though no one writes a good dumbing down story like you. My goal was just to do it in first person.
NZDom
6/29/20, 10:08 AM
2800 words in and I already came ! this is too good to be true! It's a Christmas miracle !!! better keep the rest for later. like a dessert for later treats. ❤❤
6/29/20, 10:03 AM
@NZDom - Yeah, I was surprised too! I'm excited to hear what you think :)