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6/28/20, 3:00 PM
> Also are you going to continue this scenario to where Mark cuts the hair on his head? > Ah, the perspective of twenty years later... I would absolutely include two things: one, the haircut, as you mention. I would really love to write a Samson-esque pastiche where he loses his confidence and sense of security as the hair comes off. Two, I'd definitely include a scene where Kenny fucks Mark, really dominates him, and Mark surrenders completely.
6/28/20, 2:57 PM
You're telling the story in 3rd person anyway, so it wouldn't feel too fragmented if you just gave us the story filtered through Matt's perspective at the beginning, then cut to another scene where one of Matt's slaves was recruiting his friend. That way, we could get the 3rd person narration sharing some of the friend's thoughts, as well as some of the slave's thoughts. This would also take care of the other problem I had with the story, which is that Matt is constantly telling us how happy all his slaves are (and the omniscient narration is backing him up on that). In my opinion, it works a lot better if you SHOW the slave's happiness from the slave's perspective rather than TELLING us about the slave's happiness from the master's perspective.
6/28/20, 2:57 PM
Carson/Carl will have a better sex life as the new him, not the vanilla stuff he most likely would have had
6/28/20, 2:55 PM
Also are you going to continue this scenario to where Mark cuts the hair on his head?
6/28/20, 2:54 PM
Loved it! It was amazing! Onix said to get in touch with him if we wanted to use characters from his stories, but there's no contact info... Would you consider continuing Witch Hunt: The Exercise-ist? I don't think he ever finished it, I've only ever been able to find up to chapter 3 on it and it feels so incomplete and I loved that one!
CMC
6/28/20, 2:51 PM
The sensual shave is so delightful! Honestly Mark gets a really good deal from his gift box.
6/28/20, 2:15 PM
I hope to see part 5 soon
Anonymous
6/28/20, 1:59 PM
Hypnothrill, thanks for the input. Sorry you felt let down and I can see your point. Honestly, I wasn't sure how to write multiple points-of-view without it seeming fragmented. Also, may I ask what you mean by "too sweet" and "not buying it?" I admit I tend to veer not as dark as others do on here. I might add another chapter with different perspectives, so I welcome the feedback.
6/28/20, 12:20 PM
"Cursed Cocks" is one of the best series that I've read in a while. It's creative and also, crucially, unpredictable. It was an excellent choice to explore the idea of a curse that impacts different people in different ways and may even develop over time. I particularly how Marcus continues to try and understand how the curse works and to set things right without much success. It makes for great psychological and character development. The author has also set up some great potential plotlines in terms of what will happen to Marcus once he's lost his cock (or at least all its inches) and what Erik's new cock is capable of doing to others. Maybe Jason was right to run off when he did!
6/28/20, 11:58 AM
Full disclosure: this is one of the first things I ever wrote. As I found it in the MC archive, it shows a publishing date that was earlier than I thought -- so I wrote this after my first story -- MILK MAN -- but before my second -- RECRUITS. I thought I'd written RECRUITS before this chap of LET'S GET PHYSICAL. Not that it matters, really, other than I'd put it through another edit -- there are some lines I'm not so in love with... NOW, as the writer twenty years later. But I DO love how "dated" it is. I love all the references and the technology -- that cracks me up. Talk about putting it in its place and time...