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6/28/20, 11:58 AM
Full disclosure: this is one of the first things I ever wrote. As I found it in the MC archive, it shows a publishing date that was earlier than I thought -- so I wrote this after my first story -- MILK MAN -- but before my second -- RECRUITS. I thought I'd written RECRUITS before this chap of LET'S GET PHYSICAL. Not that it matters, really, other than I'd put it through another edit -- there are some lines I'm not so in love with... NOW, as the writer twenty years later. But I DO love how "dated" it is. I love all the references and the technology -- that cracks me up. Talk about putting it in its place and time...
Martin
6/28/20, 11:47 AM
I'm usually not a fan of long stories, so I was a bit reluctant to read this piece. But man, is this hot! I've been leaking into my pants throughout the whole story. I am really happy that you both are contributing your hot, filthy, great stories to this site!
6/28/20, 11:24 AM
My target is around 2000 words per chunk of the story, so they're going to be a little quicker than I usually write.
Jun 28, 2020
DD
6/28/20, 11:03 AM
Cosmic karma, it's an all or nothing deal. take the money, take the life. I wonder if we will see the other Bart make a better life for himself with the thief's attributes?
6/28/20, 9:44 AM
It's a little fast-paced (as magic amulet stories tend to be), but otherwise VERY hot. I love how the boys accept the notion that they suddenly have a Frat Daddy.
6/28/20, 9:16 AM
Thank you all for the comments, it's wonderful to see there are so many others who loved the source material too & I can't wait to see how this develops as a community series :) Here's a link to Xavier's contributions, I think he may start posting them here as well https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/carriers-and-donors/ Any ideas / suggestions people have for sequels/prequels or what they'd like to see next would be greatly welcomed, just DM or comment - I definitely want to keep the ball rolling, so getting inspiration for new material is always great
6/28/20, 9:03 AM
Hm, the concept is still pretty hot, but really something about his friend having pretty much lost his personality turns me off. This idea could've still worked even if his friend was still who he was, and the two of them actively tried to figure out the consequences of becoming a sex god together, as opposed to one being the only one actually thinking while the other is a glorified sex genie.
6/28/20, 8:48 AM
i like where this story is going and i trust your storytelling. It'd be great to get a story tomorrow.
6/28/20, 8:26 AM
I agree with Hypnothrill above. This was a very well done chapter and it would be awesome if you can expand on the story and show more of The Crew. I especially thought that the mind controlling sequence was done very well and I like how the dad played the father role in such a sinister way, that was very good. I also liked the son's resistance too, he put up quite of a fight there. I also loved the whole symbiote aspect of it all, characters referring to themselves in the third person and how far gone his dad truly was. I'm wondering if the entire town is already under the influence of The Crew or are they just expanding right now? Anyway I hope thats something that can be explored.
6/28/20, 8:20 AM
I agree it's a very hot story, and I'd love to see it expanded with more chapters where we see "The Crew" spreading throughout the town. The only thing that felt a bit off to me was Matt's initial reaction to his father's mysterious transformation; it felt like he was already sexually attracted to his father. I think it might have been hotter if Matt initially viewed his father's overmuscled body with disgust, as something freakish and grotesque; then, we'd see him start to view it as attractive and desirable once he fell under the Crew's mind control.