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6/28/20, 8:20 AM
I agree it's a very hot story, and I'd love to see it expanded with more chapters where we see "The Crew" spreading throughout the town. The only thing that felt a bit off to me was Matt's initial reaction to his father's mysterious transformation; it felt like he was already sexually attracted to his father. I think it might have been hotter if Matt initially viewed his father's overmuscled body with disgust, as something freakish and grotesque; then, we'd see him start to view it as attractive and desirable once he fell under the Crew's mind control.
Growing Geek
6/28/20, 7:33 AM
I like it, nice job. There are some points where I some repetition in words got in the way of the flow (e.g. 3 uses of 'after' in the two sentences 'Leave it to Dustin, the lucky one of the two, to want to go after he won tickets to it after a raffle at work. After the two were seated and the show started it wasn’t as bad as Carson thought that it would be, still it wouldn’t be something he’d pay to see.'). I'd also have really liked it to be longer - it feels like the transformation is over really quickly, I'd have found it hot to understand what Carson/Carl feels about his changing body. Are his habits different? His taste in men? And I'd want to know if him and Dustin hooked up and how Dustin felt. Is Carl better than Carson? Does Dustin get changed too as a result of meeting him? It feels like it's a good start - and don't get me wrong, it is a good start! - but it also feels like there's more we could experience about the world to make it even better.
6/28/20, 7:27 AM
I'm always excited to see a story with "recruitment" in the tags, but I felt disappointed that we didn't really see the recruitment taking place (only the aftermath, when Matt sees the photos of the new recruits). I think the story would work a lot better if it wasn't so tied to Matt's perspective and we got more details about how his slaves were lustfully viewing the friends they recruited, or how the new recruits rationalized the sudden change of sexuality. Also, the tone is just too sweet for my taste. The story is going HARD on the notion that Matt is actually helping these men by changing their sexual orientation and roping them into his harem of sex slaves, and I'm not buying it.
6/28/20, 7:00 AM
HOT. I love a symbiote story. Hope to see more chapters soon.
Jun 28, 2020
Martin
6/28/20, 6:48 AM
Short, to the point, and fucking hot! A small gem, really! I love this! This is the kind of mind fuck that gets me going. Thank you very much!
Nico
6/28/20, 6:26 AM
Loveee the romantic parts of this story! I'm also a big fan of mind controlled dad's, there needs to be more stories like this! It's so hot seeing this masculine daddy following every single command given to him by his young master. As for the final chapters, I agree with the previous comment. It would be nice to see Michael become a muscle pup that walks on all fours. Phil going further into submission and forgetting about his past life. Also please make them go out in public as a couple!! If they run into anyone they know have Phil introduce Roger as his boyfriend. I really want Phil to be a gentleman on their date! Open the door, pull his chair, buy flowers, give his son/master the ROYAL treatment like the king he is.
6/28/20, 5:39 AM
I came to check this story out after reading "Motivational Speaker" since a I read a lot of comments hyping up this story. It's a pretty decent story, but I must say, its feels kinda tame and quite honestly, I don't like Jake so far. A revenge story sounds so fun in theory, but even he sucks at that since he doesn't really plan to use the Re-Educator for something worthwhile. It might not be fair to judge "Re-Educator" based on one chapter so I'm gonna give it another chance, just purely because the comments hype it up as one of an all time read masterpiece or something, so I will give it a fair shake. So far i give this like a 2.7/5
Anonymous
6/28/20, 5:22 AM
I want to see what Dace has in mind. There's stuff going on here I wouldn't presume to play with until it's revealed what it is. I'm eager to see just what is happening inside these men. I'd want to know what those machines are building. I have ideas, but I want Dace to introduce that before I play with it.
Papa Werebear
6/28/20, 5:12 AM
I would love to see more of this story! WóÓÔÒòF! 🐻 Thanks!
6/28/20, 5:02 AM
LOL! I agree with both above. Having seen flat bottomed girls (who apparently DON'T make the rockin' world go 'round), there must be assless chaps... 😉