Recent Comments

6/28/20, 12:44 AM
Do not know why didn't feel this as much. probably because it felt more expositional and specific, spelling things out, with little perspective on the outside in ignorance to infer and tease OR from the victim to feel the change in his head and how developed. Nice to hear the character talk it out and figure how it works for them. Just not, personally, engaged as much with this one moreso than the chapter where the only sex was rodents in cages if only because stuff was happening and developing and enriching when already seen and great with set up and goofy enjoyable characters.
6/28/20, 12:13 AM
This was sexy. Especially the way you wrote the pov from both men. Yeah, this was very very sexy.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 11:55 PM
We ALL love the look of a guy in chaps. It's a hot leather look, but - The phrase 'assless chaps' is redundant. By definition, chaps have no seat and they have no crotch. If they had a seat, and not a crotch, they'd be crotchless leather trousers. If they had a crotch, and not a seat, they'd be assless leather trousers. If they have both, they're leather trousers. Chaps are an outer garment originally designed for protection, which is why they were made of leather, and were worn over cloth trousers while riding a horse. Bikers wear them to prevent 'road rash'. Whomever invented the phrase 'assless chaps' was both ignorant of the garment's origins and an idiot. Please, please, PLEASE stop using this phrase. Just call them chaps. Other than that, I like your story, thank you for writing.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/27/20, 11:40 PM
Where can I get some of this beverage please?
Astral
6/27/20, 11:05 PM
Interesting premise, can't wait for more!
6/27/20, 10:44 PM
Really glad to see more work from the Cornell, TX series! I was hyped to see new stories in that universe on Nifty and now there's a way we can have more here, too! Thanks for making it a community series!
6/27/20, 9:58 PM
It's always nice and rare to see black males enslaved and on top of that, a bottom. Thank you <3
CallMeCrazy
6/27/20, 9:27 PM
god i love Eddie. Muscle Mary tfs are few and far between.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 8:36 PM
I've liked this series from the start, but you seem to have reached an extreme point here. I found it much more erotic when things were not quite so over the top. When the story was working things up to the humiliation and reluctant sexual exposure, it was at its more erotic (imho). So when new "victims" were brought into the story, I was hopeful (Cam, Jet), but there, too, you went from 0 to 100 immediately, and there was nowhere left to go. I hope you can figure out some way to sort of dial it back and write about some of the more "innocent"/gradual/humiliating elements without quite so much pain, stretching, and half-drowning in body fluids. Sorry if this sounds negative, but I loved the story so much at the beginning that I'm sorry it's moved past that early sexiness. Still a fan.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 8:30 PM
I only have mad love for Edlam and RobinHood70. You are truly the best and the site is lucky to have you both in it. I will always support y'all no matter what. This story was also pure fire and a great source of masturbatory fuel. A truly spectacular job.