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6/27/20, 7:24 PM
If people can love GRRM for having trouble finishing his stories, then we can certainly forgive you, Edlam! I also liked what you said about about not wanting to put out half-assed follow ups. I appreciate how much you care about your fans to give them quality content. And I'm quite excited to see all the other work that you have lined up in the future! As always, stay awesome Edlam!
6/27/20, 7:13 PM
It's fair to call me out for not finishing series, haha. I'm really bad at it. I just get very interested in other ideas and also go through phases where I step away from hypno for a time. I do plan on hitting back at Re-Educator and Cockslut for sure. My focus now is mostly on a new story I'm working on with a hypno friend, a short story for the Supernatural theme, and the next chapter in Retirement. But I will get back to Alex and his corruption of that town. I just don't want to put out half-ass follow ups. Gotta do it when I can fully focus on it so all of you waiting feel as though the wait was worth it! And, my goodness, do I know it's been quite a wait. Thank you all for your patience with me! I appreciate you all more than you know. And every time I get a notification about a new comment on any of my stories, I feel so proud to have helped so many of you masturbate :)
6/27/20, 6:52 PM
it is a great story so far. love the concept for it. But I still wonder how Sid will react when the friend he has is mostly gone in terms of emotion. I hope Reggie could still play games and be the emotional support still but i'm eager to where ever you take the duo!
RGM
6/27/20, 6:46 PM
The HOTTEST story I've read in a while ... great storyline, definately would love to have it continue.
boi98229
6/27/20, 6:35 PM
Personally i am not into and don't quite understand why anyone would want to be made into a gimp on a longterm basis. i know these slaves were not voluntary, so my statement of personal preference is not really relevant except to explain my reaction to the story. So that said, i still find this story incredibly hot for various reasons (descriptions of the men, the facility, the kidnapping process, the process of creating the slaves, the feeling created around the muddled but aware mental state of the slaves and switching between aware/unaware mental effects, the plot involving the turnaround/karma) but what really blows my mind is the level of dominance and control the Master(s) have over the slaves. i love the multi-faceted approach to the process of mind control/training. For me this kind of mind control is more arousing if the slave is aware of his situation, so it was hot that you described these mental states and switched between them. i'd really like to experience this kind of mind control/training. To the author, thanks for writing this really hot story and sharing your imagination and writing skills.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/27/20, 6:30 PM
Not into trucks myself, however I can see exhaust or motor noises acting like triggers or controls here.
6/27/20, 6:09 PM
You should really put some note or warning if you're going to put straight sex in your stories.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 5:55 PM
Diapers are hot. If they are an important part of the story but a reader doesn't like diaper content, seams like they are reading the wrong story.
6/27/20, 5:44 PM
@TcomJ: This installment is written in a way that it can pretty much be a self contained story. But even if this story left on a cliffhanger, how can you turn down any of Edlam's stories? I know it sucks being left "stranded" on a cliffhanger but honestly, Edlam is such a wonderfully erotic writer that I don't care how much he leaves me wanting more. His stories just satisfies me so much that I don't care of anything else. It's a torture that I would gladly endure. Keep writing for us please! Anything you post would be a blessing
Nutiper
6/27/20, 5:43 PM
Intriguing to see this erotic take on a classic sci-fi novel! Curious and looking forward to the next chapter