Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/27/20, 5:55 PM
Diapers are hot. If they are an important part of the story but a reader doesn't like diaper content, seams like they are reading the wrong story.
6/27/20, 5:44 PM
@TcomJ: This installment is written in a way that it can pretty much be a self contained story. But even if this story left on a cliffhanger, how can you turn down any of Edlam's stories? I know it sucks being left "stranded" on a cliffhanger but honestly, Edlam is such a wonderfully erotic writer that I don't care how much he leaves me wanting more. His stories just satisfies me so much that I don't care of anything else. It's a torture that I would gladly endure. Keep writing for us please! Anything you post would be a blessing
Nutiper
6/27/20, 5:43 PM
Intriguing to see this erotic take on a classic sci-fi novel! Curious and looking forward to the next chapter
6/27/20, 5:25 PM
> The story came around to a well-constructed conclusion... > Tying it in beautifully with his uber-work "THAT OLD BLACK MAGIC SERIES" of which this story is but a chapter. We see these characters again as background in one of his other stories, but I like the way he leaves them here, too. Now watch what I do in the unexpected Part 5!
Hypnominion
6/27/20, 5:10 PM
Now *this* is what I call engaging! The story came around to a well-constructed conclusion, although I'm guessing that Eddie's relationship with Jarrod isn't going to last (it's a bit one-sided) ;)
6/27/20, 4:58 PM
HOLY CRAP!!!!!! Is Onix back!??!?!?? OMG YES HIS STORIES ARE THE FUCKING BEST! Are you going to continue the story after Niko and Romi?
Anonymous
6/27/20, 4:41 PM
hope there is a sequel
Anonymous
6/27/20, 3:47 PM
So would I. When you read all the stories, you get a sense of his maturing as a sorcerer.
6/27/20, 3:38 PM
Edlam.....where is your "Re-Education" series and a bunch of other series you started and wrote it so well you stranded me on so many islands of cliffhanger??????? how could you do this???? is this new form of torture??? -_- should I...read this and get stranded on another cliffhanger!!!???
EJG
6/27/20, 2:58 PM
let the punishment continue..