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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/27/20, 6:30 PM
Not into trucks myself, however I can see exhaust or motor noises acting like triggers or controls here.
6/27/20, 6:09 PM
You should really put some note or warning if you're going to put straight sex in your stories.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 5:55 PM
Diapers are hot. If they are an important part of the story but a reader doesn't like diaper content, seams like they are reading the wrong story.
6/27/20, 5:44 PM
@TcomJ: This installment is written in a way that it can pretty much be a self contained story. But even if this story left on a cliffhanger, how can you turn down any of Edlam's stories? I know it sucks being left "stranded" on a cliffhanger but honestly, Edlam is such a wonderfully erotic writer that I don't care how much he leaves me wanting more. His stories just satisfies me so much that I don't care of anything else. It's a torture that I would gladly endure. Keep writing for us please! Anything you post would be a blessing
Nutiper
6/27/20, 5:43 PM
Intriguing to see this erotic take on a classic sci-fi novel! Curious and looking forward to the next chapter
6/27/20, 5:25 PM
> The story came around to a well-constructed conclusion... > Tying it in beautifully with his uber-work "THAT OLD BLACK MAGIC SERIES" of which this story is but a chapter. We see these characters again as background in one of his other stories, but I like the way he leaves them here, too. Now watch what I do in the unexpected Part 5!
Hypnominion
6/27/20, 5:10 PM
Now *this* is what I call engaging! The story came around to a well-constructed conclusion, although I'm guessing that Eddie's relationship with Jarrod isn't going to last (it's a bit one-sided) ;)
6/27/20, 4:58 PM
HOLY CRAP!!!!!! Is Onix back!??!?!?? OMG YES HIS STORIES ARE THE FUCKING BEST! Are you going to continue the story after Niko and Romi?
Anonymous
6/27/20, 4:41 PM
hope there is a sequel
Anonymous
6/27/20, 3:47 PM
So would I. When you read all the stories, you get a sense of his maturing as a sorcerer.