Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/27/20, 1:04 PM
Wow that was nice
6/27/20, 12:46 PM
I love it man, thank you!
6/27/20, 12:23 PM
loved this!
DD
6/27/20, 11:50 AM
This sounds like a very interesting premise, please continue your writing. I would love to see what happens with Sid.
6/27/20, 10:21 AM
it took me 3 times to get through this story. if thats not a compliment then i dont know what is. great job guys.
6/27/20, 10:15 AM
I'd love to see further stories charting the progression to Master Sorcerer and how he continues to dispense Justice and has fun
6/27/20, 10:04 AM
What a neat story
Anonymous
6/27/20, 9:52 AM
Wish I could find a stage show!
boi98229
6/27/20, 8:33 AM
Very imaginative! It was kind of fun, like a horror movie is fun. It wasn't quite as scary as it would have been had the first two victims been more fully developed as individuals. The level of domination and control the Master could wield was really hot, but i admit i had trouble leaving my thoughts of his unethical immoral behavior out of my reader's version of your world of fantasy. Still very engaging and entertaining.
6/27/20, 8:03 AM
this is the best body swap story ever ugh! two thumbs up for writing skills and five stars for the idea and flow of the story. I hope to see and read more from you.