Recent Comments

Nutiper
6/27/20, 5:43 PM
Intriguing to see this erotic take on a classic sci-fi novel! Curious and looking forward to the next chapter
6/27/20, 5:25 PM
> The story came around to a well-constructed conclusion... > Tying it in beautifully with his uber-work "THAT OLD BLACK MAGIC SERIES" of which this story is but a chapter. We see these characters again as background in one of his other stories, but I like the way he leaves them here, too. Now watch what I do in the unexpected Part 5!
Hypnominion
6/27/20, 5:10 PM
Now *this* is what I call engaging! The story came around to a well-constructed conclusion, although I'm guessing that Eddie's relationship with Jarrod isn't going to last (it's a bit one-sided) ;)
6/27/20, 4:58 PM
HOLY CRAP!!!!!! Is Onix back!??!?!?? OMG YES HIS STORIES ARE THE FUCKING BEST! Are you going to continue the story after Niko and Romi?
Anonymous
6/27/20, 4:41 PM
hope there is a sequel
Anonymous
6/27/20, 3:47 PM
So would I. When you read all the stories, you get a sense of his maturing as a sorcerer.
6/27/20, 3:38 PM
Edlam.....where is your "Re-Education" series and a bunch of other series you started and wrote it so well you stranded me on so many islands of cliffhanger??????? how could you do this???? is this new form of torture??? -_- should I...read this and get stranded on another cliffhanger!!!???
EJG
6/27/20, 2:58 PM
let the punishment continue..
EJG
6/27/20, 2:48 PM
That was HOT. Love the 'everyone else being unaware' theme. Always gets me going. It'd be a shame if those affected 'came to their sense'. Love the idea of those around Sid,carrying on as if it's normal with no shock,even away from Reggie's influence (but thats just my private fantasies). CARRY ON,REGARDLESS..
6/27/20, 2:46 PM
Very hot and love see Edward using his slaves for sex. Would love to see a future chapter from the point of view of a normal person who is enslaved to show how he enslaved everyone else in the world. That might be interesting. IDK Love the story