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Anonymous
6/27/20, 3:16 AM
Great story! Loved reading it!!
Anonymous
6/27/20, 2:03 AM
i really loved this story. i think a happy ending for this one would be nice though
bleuboy
6/27/20, 12:22 AM
Amazing story that ticked some boxes I didn't even know that I had. Great job!
6/27/20, 12:00 AM
absman20 I hear ya. It took me 3 or 4 tries to get to the end. Just thinking about re reading it now is getting me all,ummm, I gotta go.
6/26/20, 11:43 PM
So I've never done this before but here's the thing: I was initially uninspired by this story but then I got to writing and got it. Now, I wrote three chapters for this which included its ending BUT then y'all gave out a lot of suggestions and I was like 0_o Which makes me bring this up: Do y'all just want me to upload the chapters I wrote OR should I try to rewrite them with the suggestions some of you provided (granted, not all the suggestions are going to be included only because I wanted this to be a 10 chapter story.) Some of you I feel would like the way I made this story end but some would probably not like it so much. Only reason why I'm even open to doing this is because this story, unlike my others, was strongly influenced by the readers. I'll read the comments and either upload Sunday the finished chapter 8 or upload Saturday the re-written one. This is also a good way to exercise my creativity since the world is still shutdown.
6/26/20, 10:56 PM
Y'all gonna make a man blush! <3 I love the reception this has gotten and I have a few places I'm intending to take it, so there's more to come! But if people get inspired I want them to be able to contribute as well :D
6/26/20, 10:52 PM
"This is a community series", but holy crap Dace you're single-handedly mastering this—it's one of the best series going rn ^-^
6/26/20, 10:37 PM
Hypnothrill, thank you as always for reading and commenting on my work. The conflict will come in the next section. I thought this would be a long chapter but I just fell back to the my limit. It will be a diferent feel than the original work so hopefully it will meet your expectations. But I would like to hear how you think I could've put some resistance to the plan.
6/26/20, 10:03 PM
I love the kind of 'phased transformation' thing that ONIX does here. One change piles on top of another change that adds to another change. Before you know it, the original person is so different you'd never recognize them. MonsterMash62 has a similar way of making a dozen individual changes to leave a man unrecognizable.
6/26/20, 9:56 PM
My favourite story everything in it you read my mind my total fantasy to be fucked by a Incubus and make me his slave xxx