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mbblover
6/27/20, 1:20 PM
perhaps a similar story involving a drop dead beyond gorgeous huge musclebound ladies man superhero in the near future?.... perhaps the superhero (named i don't know supreme man?) goes to investigate a out in the country "reform school" with 18 year olds and the warden and soon becomes part of the brainwashed hypnotized tribe! i'm imagining a 6'6 375 plus pounds of mountain of muscle standing in a lineup in the warden's office towering over the 18 year olds in the line-up row on both sides of him as he's in the middle of this line-up/row... all wearing jockstraps or nude and all beyond rock hard and all with the at attention salute, arms to their side, chest out, head and chin out in complete control and submission to the warden as he chuckles that even supreme man is captured, conquered and converted, just like simple human 18 year olds! the visual of seeing supreme man outrageously towering over the teenagers in this kinky line-up and now going to be the plaything to this old effeminate warden and his 18 year olds (some attractive and nicely built others plain looking and wimpy) both servicing and getting serviced is pretty hot...another visual? seeing supreme man standing nude and rockhard in complete salute right next to the warden as he is doing paperwork at his desk in his office and a solid silver replica of supreme man's erection and balls resting on a small plaque on the desk as the kinkiest paperweight ever, supreme man standing at attention waiting upon the warden's orders.....what does anyone think about this story idea and some of these visuals in this story?..
Anonymous
6/27/20, 1:04 PM
Wow that was nice
6/27/20, 12:46 PM
I love it man, thank you!
6/27/20, 12:23 PM
loved this!
DD
6/27/20, 11:50 AM
This sounds like a very interesting premise, please continue your writing. I would love to see what happens with Sid.
6/27/20, 10:21 AM
it took me 3 times to get through this story. if thats not a compliment then i dont know what is. great job guys.
6/27/20, 10:15 AM
I'd love to see further stories charting the progression to Master Sorcerer and how he continues to dispense Justice and has fun
6/27/20, 10:04 AM
What a neat story
Anonymous
6/27/20, 9:52 AM
Wish I could find a stage show!
boi98229
6/27/20, 8:33 AM
Very imaginative! It was kind of fun, like a horror movie is fun. It wasn't quite as scary as it would have been had the first two victims been more fully developed as individuals. The level of domination and control the Master could wield was really hot, but i admit i had trouble leaving my thoughts of his unethical immoral behavior out of my reader's version of your world of fantasy. Still very engaging and entertaining.