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6/26/20, 9:56 PM
My favourite story everything in it you read my mind my total fantasy to be fucked by a Incubus and make me his slave xxx
6/26/20, 9:47 PM
> ONIX does such a great job of illustrating nonphysical changes–the attitudes, behaviors, and perspectives that really make up someone’s sense of self. When you couple that with sexy bits, you have a classic on your hands. > Hard to say it better than that!
6/26/20, 9:17 PM
ONIX does such a great job of illustrating nonphysical changes--the attitudes, behaviors, and perspectives that really make up someone's sense of self. When you couple that with sexy bits, you have a classic on your hands. Never gets old!
6/26/20, 9:15 PM
> I’m a huge proponent of the “slow burn” transformation narrative, so this hit ever right note for me. super-kudos! > It ain't over yet! Keep reading!
6/26/20, 8:55 PM
a very fun read...and truth be told, something i wish could play out irl for me. keep up the good work.
6/26/20, 8:51 PM
I really liked some parts of this chapter! The whole section about the "Thin Blue Line" bands being used as pro-police propaganda was very clever. But I felt like it was lacking any sense of conflict or suspense. Collins' and Roberts' plans get executed perfectly, no one resists or is suspicious, and everyone follows instructions in an orderly manner.
rodready
6/26/20, 7:21 PM
...and FanTCman
6/26/20, 7:19 PM
Dr. Manhattan is definitely the voice I used when writing his character, hopefully with enough differences that it's not completely plagiarized. The differences show more in future updates. :)
6/26/20, 6:20 PM
I got a Dr Manhattan vibe from Reggie, only obviously gayer and more explicit. I'm really enjoying this!
Anonymous
6/26/20, 6:15 PM
Great story!!!