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6/26/20, 10:56 PM
Y'all gonna make a man blush! <3 I love the reception this has gotten and I have a few places I'm intending to take it, so there's more to come! But if people get inspired I want them to be able to contribute as well :D
6/26/20, 10:52 PM
"This is a community series", but holy crap Dace you're single-handedly mastering this—it's one of the best series going rn ^-^
6/26/20, 10:37 PM
Hypnothrill, thank you as always for reading and commenting on my work. The conflict will come in the next section. I thought this would be a long chapter but I just fell back to the my limit. It will be a diferent feel than the original work so hopefully it will meet your expectations. But I would like to hear how you think I could've put some resistance to the plan.
6/26/20, 10:03 PM
I love the kind of 'phased transformation' thing that ONIX does here. One change piles on top of another change that adds to another change. Before you know it, the original person is so different you'd never recognize them. MonsterMash62 has a similar way of making a dozen individual changes to leave a man unrecognizable.
6/26/20, 9:56 PM
My favourite story everything in it you read my mind my total fantasy to be fucked by a Incubus and make me his slave xxx
6/26/20, 9:47 PM
> ONIX does such a great job of illustrating nonphysical changes–the attitudes, behaviors, and perspectives that really make up someone’s sense of self. When you couple that with sexy bits, you have a classic on your hands. > Hard to say it better than that!
6/26/20, 9:17 PM
ONIX does such a great job of illustrating nonphysical changes--the attitudes, behaviors, and perspectives that really make up someone's sense of self. When you couple that with sexy bits, you have a classic on your hands. Never gets old!
6/26/20, 9:15 PM
> I’m a huge proponent of the “slow burn” transformation narrative, so this hit ever right note for me. super-kudos! > It ain't over yet! Keep reading!
6/26/20, 8:55 PM
a very fun read...and truth be told, something i wish could play out irl for me. keep up the good work.
6/26/20, 8:51 PM
I really liked some parts of this chapter! The whole section about the "Thin Blue Line" bands being used as pro-police propaganda was very clever. But I felt like it was lacking any sense of conflict or suspense. Collins' and Roberts' plans get executed perfectly, no one resists or is suspicious, and everyone follows instructions in an orderly manner.