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Anonymous
6/26/20, 5:53 PM
This is a first read for me; I'm a huge proponent of the "slow burn" transformation narrative, so this hit ever right note for me. super-kudos!
6/26/20, 5:41 PM
I always look forward to another chapter of this series. One of my favorites...
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/26/20, 5:18 PM
Where can I order one of these? Anybody can control me, I don't care, as long as I am being controlled.
TandySensation
6/26/20, 4:49 PM
Absman & Topaz! The legends are returning. Hoping for Onix, Texzilla, Aardvark… Wonderful to learn more about the real people who wrote the fantasies.
6/26/20, 4:46 PM
i hope ONIX stopped writing because he found happiness, so didn't need this outlet!
6/26/20, 3:28 PM
Great theme and story. Definitely would be nice to know future plot. Has some serious and confusing typos or spell check entering the wrong words, especially in part one. Still a unique and interesting story well worth reading.
6/26/20, 2:33 PM
I still remember reading this story for the first time years ago. It was one of the first (and best) transformation stories I had ever read. I jerked off to this story countless times. I really think it created my love for transformation stories that still exists today. It has been a pleasure revisiting it after all these years.
6/26/20, 2:24 PM
Please don't mistake me by my statement that exposition has changed over the years that I think it's changed for the BETTER -- I don't!!! I'm just pointing out that it has and here, in this story, the exposition amounts to half the story... and it works BRILLIANTLY!
nycboot
6/26/20, 2:11 PM
Hey abs, I understand what you talking about when one knows the story already - the exposition seems longer and less important and you just wanna get to the good stuff. But what's so wonderful about this story is that the backstory is so good that it really takes you into the mind of Eddie. The reader is really puzzled (if fascinated) by the new versions of Tony, Mark and Jerod, the big question being "How did they get that way?" So it's not just the transformation sequence (which is superb), but because the character has captured our empathy and that the reader is dying to know what happened, prepares for the third chapter, making the transformation all the more thrilling, thus making the story so stupendous. And I know at least in my case, Eddie's "coming out" kinda reminds me of my coming out (now over 40 years ago) - I looked at magazines and thought no, yes, no, yes, etc. There are so many stories on this site that explore the straight-to-gay theme that clearly many guys also try to relive their own recognition of their orientation. So watching Eddie struggle maybe captures an extra something that most of us have experienced as well.
6/26/20, 1:56 PM
So HOT, so detailed, you've got me wanting/begging for more. If you published a book series, I would buy every one of them!