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6/26/20, 1:53 PM
I remember the first time I read this story -- I didn't get past the underwear section before I shot a load. I'm not kidding when I say it took me, like, four reads to get completely through this chapter -- that's how masterful it is. As time has gone by, this style of story has changed and exposition has become less important. I mean, here we had to wait THREE chapters before the transformation occurred -- and even then it's painfully drawn out. Brilliantly paced. True erotic writing does lead to a climax -- often literally. And I've cum back to this story again and again.
nycboot
6/26/20, 1:45 PM
Technical note: There are hundreds of stories on this site where a character takes something that enchants him and changes his life. But what's so simple and brilliant in this story is that Onix provides Eddie with not a single item but a whole gift package containing a cornucopia of items. Thus the character has the opportunity to transform multiple times and in multiple stages. That's one of the things that makes this chapter so brilliant and so....I **know** I'm not alone here...so arousing that one has to j/o.
6/26/20, 1:45 PM
Your words arouse my total core and keep me on the brink with each sentence. I can visually see the action and wish I was there with them. Great storytelling!
6/26/20, 1:32 PM
You kept me hard through the whole story, wanting (and needing) more! Gotta read more while I'm leaking!
6/26/20, 11:34 AM
OMG this is fucking hot
Thom
6/26/20, 11:08 AM
Really wondering where you're taking this
6/26/20, 11:00 AM
poor Leo hasn't even noticed how Coach actually helps him to be a better mind controller. He's kinda...dumb,in the best way possible. XD
Speedos
6/26/20, 8:21 AM
Great story! But I totally agree about making diapers more integral to the story. As something erotic, as a symbol of submission, or as part of the wethou Edwards uses in the brainwashing. Really cool world building! I love the traditional hypnosis and Wiley logic used to make them love their master and their diapers.
6/26/20, 7:55 AM
You really are one of the best authors on the site. I have enjoyed reading this story so much (if you know what I mean)
6/26/20, 6:27 AM
Wowza. Loved it.