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Speedos
6/26/20, 8:21 AM
Great story! But I totally agree about making diapers more integral to the story. As something erotic, as a symbol of submission, or as part of the wethou Edwards uses in the brainwashing. Really cool world building! I love the traditional hypnosis and Wiley logic used to make them love their master and their diapers.
6/26/20, 7:55 AM
You really are one of the best authors on the site. I have enjoyed reading this story so much (if you know what I mean)
6/26/20, 6:27 AM
Wowza. Loved it.
6/26/20, 6:04 AM
In Greek Mythology, there is the story of the SIRENS. They were dangerous creatures, who lured nearby sailors with their singing voices to shipwreck on a rocky coast. This is the story behind the story that Ready to Change has given us here. I read this as a test composition. Ready to Change putting down in words the notes he has been hearing in his head. Would anyone else be tempted by this melody? I can tell you that I certainly was. I over looked the lapses in the plot, because I bought into the story early on. One clever writing devise is not to name the anti-hero. By not giving him a name, we automatically insert our own name into the story. That's exactly the point. We, like the ancient sailors, are sucked into the plot. If this was intentional or accidental, doesn't matter. It shows great narrative skills. Sometimes, the shorter and simpler the composition is the better test of talent.
6/26/20, 4:57 AM
nice chapter..though I really would like to see you go back to the diapers like in part 1. I think that would make the story alot better because we don't see that many diaper stories
6/26/20, 3:17 AM
I always loved Tony and would always love a chapter showing how his life ended up being does he meet another man, does he find a top, etc.
6/26/20, 2:24 AM
Love this concept! I'm eager for more chapters
6/26/20, 12:49 AM
> What bothers me is not knowing what’s in that shampoo. > Cycle One (King Rex's cum).... hahaha wrong universe
6/26/20, 12:43 AM
The slight twist was hot. So yeah great fun story!
nycboot
6/26/20, 12:30 AM
I agree with BlindSeer0's observation - 4 homophobes turn into 4 gay stereotypes. We don't see any sex so whether they're top or bottom (to me) seems a minor issue, insofar as it affects their stereotype characterization. And I think using the top/bottom category is not quite right in this case because it doesn't affect people's personality. Tony is a bottom but is very extrovert (hate to say it but I've met plenty of Tonys). You'd think the big hulky Mark would be a top but no, he's not only a bottom but a real kind of sub/slave mentality, totally dependent on his top/Master. In any case, that aspect of the story never bothered me. What bothers me is not knowing what's in that shampoo. :)