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6/26/20, 11:00 AM
poor Leo hasn't even noticed how Coach actually helps him to be a better mind controller. He's kinda...dumb,in the best way possible. XD
Speedos
6/26/20, 8:21 AM
Great story! But I totally agree about making diapers more integral to the story. As something erotic, as a symbol of submission, or as part of the wethou Edwards uses in the brainwashing. Really cool world building! I love the traditional hypnosis and Wiley logic used to make them love their master and their diapers.
6/26/20, 7:55 AM
You really are one of the best authors on the site. I have enjoyed reading this story so much (if you know what I mean)
6/26/20, 6:27 AM
Wowza. Loved it.
6/26/20, 6:04 AM
In Greek Mythology, there is the story of the SIRENS. They were dangerous creatures, who lured nearby sailors with their singing voices to shipwreck on a rocky coast. This is the story behind the story that Ready to Change has given us here. I read this as a test composition. Ready to Change putting down in words the notes he has been hearing in his head. Would anyone else be tempted by this melody? I can tell you that I certainly was. I over looked the lapses in the plot, because I bought into the story early on. One clever writing devise is not to name the anti-hero. By not giving him a name, we automatically insert our own name into the story. That's exactly the point. We, like the ancient sailors, are sucked into the plot. If this was intentional or accidental, doesn't matter. It shows great narrative skills. Sometimes, the shorter and simpler the composition is the better test of talent.
6/26/20, 4:57 AM
nice chapter..though I really would like to see you go back to the diapers like in part 1. I think that would make the story alot better because we don't see that many diaper stories
6/26/20, 3:17 AM
I always loved Tony and would always love a chapter showing how his life ended up being does he meet another man, does he find a top, etc.
6/26/20, 2:24 AM
Love this concept! I'm eager for more chapters
6/26/20, 12:49 AM
> What bothers me is not knowing what’s in that shampoo. > Cycle One (King Rex's cum).... hahaha wrong universe
6/26/20, 12:43 AM
The slight twist was hot. So yeah great fun story!