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6/25/20, 10:24 PM
I think I have a VERY bad track record of not finishing continuing stories...so I prolly shouldn't promise anything here...I still gotta get back to Re-Educator, Retirement, and Cockslut...and I even had a story around Jerry, the homosexual demon dude, in my mind. So, no promises of a continuation here. But there's definitely fodder for more! Rick clearly has a knack for collecting boys, so wouldn't be too hard to consider some of his other victories :P
6/25/20, 10:09 PM
I don't think it's likely that I would be involved in a sequel, considering that I couldn't even figure out how to end the story in the first place! 😂 If Edlam wants to continue it, either on his own or in collaboration with others, I'd be very interested to see where they take it.
6/25/20, 10:09 PM
One of the things that has always puzzled me about this story was how all the guys turn into big ol' himbo bottoms... except Jarod. I mean, I know a LOT of big leather queens. He still could've been big and hairy and into leather, but why didn't he change into a bottom like the others? I know there are Jarod fans in the house -- we heard from one last chapter -- thoughts? Opinions?
6/25/20, 8:03 PM
This is a masterclass in foreshadowing.
Rick's Fan
6/25/20, 7:56 PM
PS: Coq Au Vin's little insert is how I picture Alec and Chris would be in a few months whenever they get desperate enough to want to cum. It got me really aroused and horny thinking how much each boy's willing to give up to get their orgasm (but no shaving please, I don't like completely hairless guys, no matter how submissive they're supposed to be) And It would be so great to see how indifferent would Rick be to their plight as well.
Rick's Fan
6/25/20, 7:52 PM
This was so deliciously erotic. The cruelty of it all was just so orgasmic. I especially love the rude awakening that Steve got for his arrogance, he really deserved to learn his place. I really wish we get to see more of Alec, Chris and Steve's lives afterwards, like more of how their functioning now after Rick has fully fucked up their minds. I want to see Alec and Chris still try to be "straight" even though they are not anymore. I want to see Steve continually be humiliated, abused and treated worse than filth, especially by his brother and his best friend. And I also want to see all the tactics and ideas that Alec and Chris have in order to convince Rick to let them cum. They probably would get a lot desperate over the years and Rick probably couldn't care less at all, so I'm curious to see how the boys are handling that. That would be so hot! Question for the authors: Is it a feasible to expect a follow up sequel? I'm not even sure if its a possibility or if you considered it but I would like to know please. Even if the story is over, I would like to know that too, please!
6/25/20, 7:45 PM
Well, here's an oldie, but a goodie. I remember reading these and your chapter. Not my cup of tea, but it was worth a whack or two. ;)
Rodready
6/25/20, 7:26 PM
btw - my actual all time favorite Onix is "Livin' La Vida Loca" which is some dark, hot shit. Practical magic.
Rodready
6/25/20, 7:21 PM
Wow. The return of Onix, even if it is re-posts. Apart from the inventiveness and humor, he knows exactly how to write - ahem - one-handed fiction that you can come back to over and over again like it is fresh. If he felt like making comeback, the fans would be out in force to welcome him. And Absman - look forward to your extra chapter, dude.
6/25/20, 6:43 PM
What a HOT story! So happy to see another piece from Edlam! But at the same time this is also just a perfect collaboration between two great writers. Your styles complement each other very well and works very well to add some "extra spice" to the usual writing styles that we're used to for each of you. The whole thing just flows smoothly and seamlessly from start to end! I sure would be grateful to see more similar collaborations like this, but I also look forward to new individual works from each of you as well! (Edlam, I'm eagerly waiting for more on your Retirement series! ;) )