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nycboot
6/25/20, 6:15 PM
Wait till you get to the next chapter. "Potential" ain't strong enough a word...
6/25/20, 5:59 PM
As far as I can tell, this is a truly ORIGINAL idea, which is rare in the genre. The writing is intelligent and the eye (nose) for detail makes it work even better. READYTOCHANGE may be the new alpha dog on the block.
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:55 PM
potential
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:36 PM
Cliffhanger! I love the muscle growth, esp. the descriptions about bulging chests, butts and legs! Dumbing down - eh, no so enjoyable, but still a compelling part of the story!
6/25/20, 5:26 PM
So Good, Man. Makes me want to be a Cockslut too!
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:20 PM
I always get freaked out at dumbing down scenarios, because they seem to imply that you always have to make a trade -either skinny/fat and smart, or Jacked/muscular and stupid. This was well written, with the gradual changes to the narrator just nebulous enough that the reader and the narrator weren't quite sure what was changing --- -until it was too late. It was also a nice touch to have his arms lag behind the rest of his body so that he was stoked to pay $10,000 (!!!) to finish the transformation. Chilling story, well executed.
6/25/20, 5:19 PM
And so am I looking forward to the morning XD
BeefySub
6/25/20, 2:17 PM
that was intense!! more demon transformation stories please!
6/25/20, 1:33 PM
Also, I hope to see more of the city now, so we can see the aftermath of the town-wide wish
6/25/20, 1:04 PM
next part will be awesome, uncle Ben will be in for an interesting day soon