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Rodready
6/25/20, 7:26 PM
btw - my actual all time favorite Onix is "Livin' La Vida Loca" which is some dark, hot shit. Practical magic.
Rodready
6/25/20, 7:21 PM
Wow. The return of Onix, even if it is re-posts. Apart from the inventiveness and humor, he knows exactly how to write - ahem - one-handed fiction that you can come back to over and over again like it is fresh. If he felt like making comeback, the fans would be out in force to welcome him. And Absman - look forward to your extra chapter, dude.
6/25/20, 6:43 PM
What a HOT story! So happy to see another piece from Edlam! But at the same time this is also just a perfect collaboration between two great writers. Your styles complement each other very well and works very well to add some "extra spice" to the usual writing styles that we're used to for each of you. The whole thing just flows smoothly and seamlessly from start to end! I sure would be grateful to see more similar collaborations like this, but I also look forward to new individual works from each of you as well! (Edlam, I'm eagerly waiting for more on your Retirement series! ;) )
nycboot
6/25/20, 6:15 PM
Wait till you get to the next chapter. "Potential" ain't strong enough a word...
6/25/20, 5:59 PM
As far as I can tell, this is a truly ORIGINAL idea, which is rare in the genre. The writing is intelligent and the eye (nose) for detail makes it work even better. READYTOCHANGE may be the new alpha dog on the block.
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:55 PM
potential
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:36 PM
Cliffhanger! I love the muscle growth, esp. the descriptions about bulging chests, butts and legs! Dumbing down - eh, no so enjoyable, but still a compelling part of the story!
6/25/20, 5:26 PM
So Good, Man. Makes me want to be a Cockslut too!
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:20 PM
I always get freaked out at dumbing down scenarios, because they seem to imply that you always have to make a trade -either skinny/fat and smart, or Jacked/muscular and stupid. This was well written, with the gradual changes to the narrator just nebulous enough that the reader and the narrator weren't quite sure what was changing --- -until it was too late. It was also a nice touch to have his arms lag behind the rest of his body so that he was stoked to pay $10,000 (!!!) to finish the transformation. Chilling story, well executed.
6/25/20, 5:19 PM
And so am I looking forward to the morning XD