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6/25/20, 11:56 PM
i always assumed it was because the punishments are karmic. This is a common thing in Onyx's work, at least from what I've noticed. All 4 guys are rich, powerful, and successful. They consider themselves smarter than others (and thus why they're successful), and think that everyone else is either dumb or lazy. They're also all homophobic, and reduce gay people down to stereotypes: young, vapid, and obsessed with muscle and sex. So in the end they all get blue collar jobs (or at least low level positions that don't require higher education), have no ambitions beyond sex and muscle, and become young himbos. Specifically: Tony resents people of his ethnicity who play into stereotypes, so he of course becomes that very stereotype. Mark is toxicly masculine, sexist and homophobic. He often lashes out at others for not acting how he expects and enforces it by being larger and stronger than most people, which he got through practical work. Because of this he becomes a sub who listens to the man he abused, bottoms ("the girl in the relationship"), has no ambition beyond doing what he's told, and is a mass of impractical muscle that only exists to show it off for others. Jarod is interesting in that while he ends up arguably more blue collar than the others and just as muscular, he seems to be more aware of what's happening. He's also a dominant top. That part is probably because he was the lackey, the one who listened to the others, so when they become more subservient, he becomes more dominant. But he was also the only one who tried to stop Mark's abuse of the gay man. Sure, he still has homophobic beliefs, but here doesn't want to be confrontational or actually hurt anyone. so i think the reason he was affected the way he was was because of that kindness and the fact that he was kind of a victim of the other three, after a fashion.
6/25/20, 11:17 PM
I always figured *somebody* in the group had to be on top.
6/25/20, 10:36 PM
Loved every moment of it. Hope to see more added on to this would like to see Lt. kevin yancey go thru some more degradation
Eric Roesch
6/25/20, 10:24 PM
The story is great, and I really enjoyed the characterization.
6/25/20, 10:24 PM
I think I have a VERY bad track record of not finishing continuing stories...so I prolly shouldn't promise anything here...I still gotta get back to Re-Educator, Retirement, and Cockslut...and I even had a story around Jerry, the homosexual demon dude, in my mind. So, no promises of a continuation here. But there's definitely fodder for more! Rick clearly has a knack for collecting boys, so wouldn't be too hard to consider some of his other victories :P
6/25/20, 10:09 PM
I don't think it's likely that I would be involved in a sequel, considering that I couldn't even figure out how to end the story in the first place! 😂 If Edlam wants to continue it, either on his own or in collaboration with others, I'd be very interested to see where they take it.
6/25/20, 10:09 PM
One of the things that has always puzzled me about this story was how all the guys turn into big ol' himbo bottoms... except Jarod. I mean, I know a LOT of big leather queens. He still could've been big and hairy and into leather, but why didn't he change into a bottom like the others? I know there are Jarod fans in the house -- we heard from one last chapter -- thoughts? Opinions?
6/25/20, 8:03 PM
This is a masterclass in foreshadowing.
Rick's Fan
6/25/20, 7:56 PM
PS: Coq Au Vin's little insert is how I picture Alec and Chris would be in a few months whenever they get desperate enough to want to cum. It got me really aroused and horny thinking how much each boy's willing to give up to get their orgasm (but no shaving please, I don't like completely hairless guys, no matter how submissive they're supposed to be) And It would be so great to see how indifferent would Rick be to their plight as well.
Rick's Fan
6/25/20, 7:52 PM
This was so deliciously erotic. The cruelty of it all was just so orgasmic. I especially love the rude awakening that Steve got for his arrogance, he really deserved to learn his place. I really wish we get to see more of Alec, Chris and Steve's lives afterwards, like more of how their functioning now after Rick has fully fucked up their minds. I want to see Alec and Chris still try to be "straight" even though they are not anymore. I want to see Steve continually be humiliated, abused and treated worse than filth, especially by his brother and his best friend. And I also want to see all the tactics and ideas that Alec and Chris have in order to convince Rick to let them cum. They probably would get a lot desperate over the years and Rick probably couldn't care less at all, so I'm curious to see how the boys are handling that. That would be so hot! Question for the authors: Is it a feasible to expect a follow up sequel? I'm not even sure if its a possibility or if you considered it but I would like to know please. Even if the story is over, I would like to know that too, please!