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Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:55 PM
potential
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:36 PM
Cliffhanger! I love the muscle growth, esp. the descriptions about bulging chests, butts and legs! Dumbing down - eh, no so enjoyable, but still a compelling part of the story!
6/25/20, 5:26 PM
So Good, Man. Makes me want to be a Cockslut too!
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:20 PM
I always get freaked out at dumbing down scenarios, because they seem to imply that you always have to make a trade -either skinny/fat and smart, or Jacked/muscular and stupid. This was well written, with the gradual changes to the narrator just nebulous enough that the reader and the narrator weren't quite sure what was changing --- -until it was too late. It was also a nice touch to have his arms lag behind the rest of his body so that he was stoked to pay $10,000 (!!!) to finish the transformation. Chilling story, well executed.
6/25/20, 5:19 PM
And so am I looking forward to the morning XD
BeefySub
6/25/20, 2:17 PM
that was intense!! more demon transformation stories please!
6/25/20, 1:33 PM
Also, I hope to see more of the city now, so we can see the aftermath of the town-wide wish
6/25/20, 1:04 PM
next part will be awesome, uncle Ben will be in for an interesting day soon
6/25/20, 12:57 PM
> It gives readers a chance to observe and study your literary evolution. I’ve long felt that, maybe 20 years from now, doctoral students will be studying this site to understand what drives some male psyches. > I have a certain amount of pity for the person who decides to catalog my work after my death. I'm a published author IRL (mostly humor) and have made a good side-living writing music/lyrics for a LOT of shows, including two national tours (international if you include the six weeks in South Korea), and a proud contribution to the Edinburgh Fringe Festival a few years ago. As I say, pity the fool who has to figure out where these stories fit into that mess. I also fantasize about an Omnibus, a collection of these stories in printed form -- with illustrations! Oh... to dream.
6/25/20, 12:36 PM
I’m still loving this story. I can’t wait to see what you have planned for us next!