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nycboot
6/24/20, 7:49 PM
Maybe not 2000, but I've also read this story many times, and have gone over in my head the events of chapter 3 - almost as if I see it like a movie on an endless loop. It's like I can't get enough of it. Thank you so much absman420 and Martin for posting it here!!
Anonymous
6/24/20, 7:48 PM
This one is fucking amazing, I’ve never cum so hard before!
6/24/20, 7:43 PM
I read this story about 2000 times when I was a horny teenager, and at least a hundred times since. I love ONIX's work, and I probably wouldn't have gotten into writing without it. Thanks for posting this – time to read it again!
6/24/20, 7:38 PM
I love how the demons Yat and M’Etep become possessed themselves. Very hot.
6/24/20, 6:16 PM
LOL, yeah, I saw someone use "cock-penis" somewhere a while back and looked it up in Urban Dictionary. It's there, but has very few hits, so I suspect it's not really "a thing". I went with it anyway, just to add to the pretentiousness of the character.
6/24/20, 4:55 PM
I don't have any ideas for further chapters myself, but if anyone else wants to add chapters to it, I'm happy to open it up to the community.
Anonymous
6/24/20, 3:45 PM
would be great to read more
Anonymous
6/24/20, 3:43 PM
I'm still hard!!!
EJG
6/24/20, 3:28 PM
Nice. Love the public and the unaware elements to it.Makes it hotter
Willie Cici
6/24/20, 2:55 PM
I've only read your stories on this site. This was my first read. It's well written. That's goes without saying. For me, it's the subtle approach to the hypnotic control. He gets the narrator, seemingly with ease. He has Dakota and he entranced Brian years ago. And then the sex just makes you want a cigarette!! I loved it. Is there a sequel in these characters? I'll leave this question to the more qualified writers on this site.