Recent Comments

6/24/20, 5:20 AM
I wouldn't say either of us helped...it was very much a collaboration throughout. I started the story, Edlam finished it, and then it went back and forth again before publishing, with both of us touching up each other's stuff.
6/24/20, 4:36 AM
I enjoyed this story immensely. Kudos to both of you on this awesome collaboration!
Mmggiioo
6/24/20, 4:04 AM
omg this is gods work,,!!!
Anonymous
6/24/20, 3:58 AM
An American would not use the term "twat" or "arse". They are more English/Australian phrases.
firesix
6/24/20, 3:46 AM
What a fantastic story. Thank you, Edlam, for returning, and thank you Robinhood70 for your continued greatness. You two are the best out there.
6/24/20, 3:17 AM
So I just finished reading the rest of the story and I gotta say I LOVED IT!!!!! This story has a lot of re-educator vibes in it and I really loved it when Steve was knocked down a few pegs and his brother and best friend turned on him and totally degraded him. Thats the sort of thing that I have been missing from Edlam's stories. My favorite part by far was when Rick made Chris and Alec need to have permission to cum. Orgasm denial is one of my biggest kinks, and I love the idea of virile, jock studs not having the freedom to shoot whenever they want. I kinda wish Rick would've pushed it further and totally denied the boys the privilege to cum though. I thought Rick got too merciful there. I hate to admit this but I'm not very familiar with Robinhood70 and his stories. I'm gonna have to do some homework and check his stories out I'm a huge fan of the vampire diaries when it was on so I'm really happy you got the inspiration for the guys there since I think the actors of that show are really good looking I also find it funny that Alaric Saltzman was your inspiration for the hypnotist because Rick ends up being an obese character which is not like him at all, lol. Really awesome installment and an all time new favorite for me. I will defintitely be going back and rereading this for some very awesome wanking material. I know it was kinda close ended but I wouldnt mind seeing an epilogue, or a "where are they now" kind of entry for this series!
6/24/20, 3:17 AM
So hot. Loved it.
Indigo3
6/24/20, 3:09 AM
This may be an unpopular opinion, but I actually hope Jake does get to turn back into a top at the end, but with a more open mind (switch maybe?).
6/24/20, 2:37 AM
Please continue!
Anonymous
6/24/20, 2:27 AM
Very hot, but too short! Very eager now to see how the Chief debases himself, especially given that he sounds like such a masculine bull of a man.