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6/24/20, 2:37 AM
Please continue!
Anonymous
6/24/20, 2:27 AM
Very hot, but too short! Very eager now to see how the Chief debases himself, especially given that he sounds like such a masculine bull of a man.
6/24/20, 2:23 AM
As Edlam explained, I had the idea for the beginning of the story back around 2014. I never really found an ending to it, though. I recently gave Edlam access to my stories and he found the start I'd made on this and asked if I had plans to finish it, cuz he really liked the setup. I told him that I didn't know what to do with it. That's when we came up with the idea for him to finish it, and I think he did a brilliant job! For those who like my fantasy castings, this is who I imagined in the roles of the boys (as they would have looked at the time). Back then, I was still watching The Vampire Diaries, and I took a liking to a new actor on the show, so decided to slot him into the fantasy that I was developing. The other two followed from there. One of them will look familiar to those who've read my stories. I don't normally use the same casting across different stories, but at the time I put him in Web of Trust, this story was dead in the water. 😛 * Steve: [image](http://chris-wood.org/photos/displayimage.php?album=26&pid=592#top_display_media) (down atm, but I suspect that's temporary...[here's an alternate](https://youngentertainmentmag.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/9DMuQtXw-630x630.jpg) just in case). * Chris: [image](https://imgix.bustle.com/lovelace/uploads/79/ac44b4a0-7db5-0132-1d85-0a2c89e5f2f5.jpg?q=70) * Alec: [image](https://imgix.bustle.com/rehost/2016/9/13/c4899577-6e3a-4d6e-9d33-d86810a6f34e.jpg?q=70) I don't recall having a specific person in my head for Rick, although there *was* a character on the show named Rick, so maybe at some point I flirted with him as the hypnotist? I honestly don't recall. He doesn't look like the Rick currently in the story, so I'm not sure.
6/24/20, 2:11 AM
I hope to see the chief turned into a lower fool than Humpme :P For a moment I thought you were going to make him suck his feet when he put them on the desk, sadly not, but its fine, I love it non the less.
Anonymous
6/24/20, 1:54 AM
Fuck, yeah, Nakintr! Youre right agood reverse role on the chief would be hot! If he's described as intelligent, disciplined, and "an inspiration", would be fun to see him becoming very stupid, incompetent, messed up and a real laughing stock. A meek muscled moron, a maid or a broken loser... so many options! But I'd like that even if he's lower than Humpme, he still remain as a chief in name, if only to be mocked by the officers that used to respect him.
6/24/20, 1:36 AM
Would love more chapters!
6/24/20, 1:36 AM
it would be amazingly hot if the chief will be taken down to be even lower than officer Humpme. Maybe from station chief to station maid !
6/24/20, 1:17 AM
naughty and psychological Is he being seduced or him others. I can feel and smell the scene. an erotic experience wish more
6/24/20, 12:49 AM
Two of my favourite writers on this site made a story together? Incredible, so excited to read it!
6/24/20, 12:20 AM
Incredibly hot - always happy to see new stories from Edlam