Recent Comments

6/23/20, 11:51 PM
Hey, betaman! Just wanted to say I enjoyed this new branch of Ass Assassin Round 1! It should be interesting to see Kyle, Rick and Hayden (well, Hayden not so much) get a new lease of life in your branch. I appreciate the effort you've put in to keep the character descriptions consistent - I know how long this stuff can take to do right! Looking forward to how this continues.
Steve
6/23/20, 11:46 PM
Can't wait for. Any ideas when the next chapter is out?
EJG
6/23/20, 11:26 PM
Hot. Suppose this is the end though? Makes me want more
Anonymous
6/23/20, 11:11 PM
I'll admit I was a bit confused as to what was going on here. Was the business man Jerod triggered in his growth by the mysterious pen? If that's the case, how did it happen that Jerod seemed to have no idea what the pen would do? It seems like the pen just mysteriously appeared as two guys met randomly on a train, and things unfolded from there. It was an intriguing set up, rather than a complete story. The growth descriptions were intriguing and done well. I enjoyed the growth
6/23/20, 10:24 PM
Not gonna lie, I went crazy when I saw Edlam's name when I was checking the latest story posts. So glad that you updated! And as usual, you didn't disappoint. I only got halfway through so far, but I'm really liking Rick!
Anonymous
6/23/20, 10:13 PM
add chastity!
6/23/20, 10:04 PM
That was a lot of fun.
6/23/20, 9:55 PM
Why did you switch from past to present tense midway through?
6/23/20, 9:47 PM
Really reminiscent of my first time with a live tist. He had me tightly bound to his bed frame in my hockey uniform, held his skate shoe to my face (I always get pretty focused on sweat, doesn't mean anything), said some trigger I don't remember now (it's been years!) and I roared and broke his bed apart getting loose. But of course I was just playing along the whole time. No one ever told me how rare it is to actually "feel like you're in a trance" until you get a lot of practice going under.