Recent Comments

6/24/20, 1:36 AM
Would love more chapters!
6/24/20, 1:36 AM
it would be amazingly hot if the chief will be taken down to be even lower than officer Humpme. Maybe from station chief to station maid !
6/24/20, 1:17 AM
naughty and psychological Is he being seduced or him others. I can feel and smell the scene. an erotic experience wish more
6/24/20, 12:49 AM
Two of my favourite writers on this site made a story together? Incredible, so excited to read it!
6/24/20, 12:20 AM
Incredibly hot - always happy to see new stories from Edlam
6/23/20, 11:51 PM
Hey, betaman! Just wanted to say I enjoyed this new branch of Ass Assassin Round 1! It should be interesting to see Kyle, Rick and Hayden (well, Hayden not so much) get a new lease of life in your branch. I appreciate the effort you've put in to keep the character descriptions consistent - I know how long this stuff can take to do right! Looking forward to how this continues.
Steve
6/23/20, 11:46 PM
Can't wait for. Any ideas when the next chapter is out?
EJG
6/23/20, 11:26 PM
Hot. Suppose this is the end though? Makes me want more
Anonymous
6/23/20, 11:11 PM
I'll admit I was a bit confused as to what was going on here. Was the business man Jerod triggered in his growth by the mysterious pen? If that's the case, how did it happen that Jerod seemed to have no idea what the pen would do? It seems like the pen just mysteriously appeared as two guys met randomly on a train, and things unfolded from there. It was an intriguing set up, rather than a complete story. The growth descriptions were intriguing and done well. I enjoyed the growth