Recent Comments

6/23/20, 5:46 PM
I wonder what will be the chief's new name?
Anonymous
6/23/20, 5:42 PM
it's great
6/23/20, 4:44 PM
Very hot, would love to see more dumbing stuff
6/23/20, 4:32 PM
Literally my first story of yours that I'd read, Robin. An absolute classic that had me falling in love with your style. Definitely one that inspired me to start writing!
6/23/20, 4:31 PM
OMG I am LOVING this!!! GREAT work!!
Anonymous
6/23/20, 4:13 PM
meh
Anonymous
6/23/20, 3:39 PM
Amazing! Please bring a sequel
Anonymous
6/23/20, 3:30 PM
@Delicious1papaya: Sorry to tell ya this, kid, but high school romances tend to fall apart after they graduate. Its just the way of the world. They meet new people and ultimately move on with their lives. Its the logical ending to their story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/23/20, 2:50 PM
I really love dumbing down down, especially in a jock. Was kind of hoping he would be acquiring a football uniform, maybe made too stupid to remove it, go out in public, etc.
6/23/20, 2:12 PM
Impressive job! The descriptions, the details, the slow build-up.... it has it all. Do you plan on carrying on from it? I'd love to see Torg putting his new body to good use, and Eddy (or whatever is left from him) shifting his attitude to get used to it.