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Anonymous
6/23/20, 9:40 AM
Fucking loved it! I love how raunchy and kinky it got and I feel it could go even further. Maybe in a part 2 Gareth recognizes a bit of heterosexuality and hesitation in Jason and decides to eliminate it completely. Maybe Gareth decides to get Jason on his knees and tie / cuff his hands behind his back and shove Jason's face in his ass, teaching him how to worship and eat out his bear master's fat ass. Maybe at a few points he even farts in his face and tells him to sniff and huff it all up. That he needs to learn to love his bear master's smells. :)
6/23/20, 8:56 AM
great start. look forward to what happens next. thanks for sharing.
6/23/20, 8:16 AM
always find myself coming back to this story. such a hot concept and great writing. I hope to see a sequel or prequel someday!
6/23/20, 7:46 AM
They're enjoyable enough to write, even if I prefer the novel-style stories most of the time. I've given some thought to turning Happy Daze into a short-story anthology, with Roger as the hypnotist in a variety of situations. That's more or less what Web of Trust was supposed to be originally, but it kind of took on a life of its own. 😉
6/23/20, 7:40 AM
ok so I agree with you on not shaving his hiar...Im also hairy and it makes a man more masculine and dominant but the narrative of story demanded this twist....even in real experience my slaves (if are hairy) , have to shave their armpits, groin and chest....as I don't like hairy slaves men....so Danny had to become a hairless sub...the real Danny Smith is also the same
6/23/20, 6:26 AM
I remember this one from MCStories! It's still one of my favorites. I know you prefer writing multi-chapter epics, but you're so good at these shorter stories as well.
Anonymous
6/23/20, 6:20 AM
Yeah, I remember this story. It was hot then and it's still hot now. Thanks for sharing.
Lusty Stallion
6/23/20, 5:59 AM
Loved it man. Glad you explained the mechanics situation. Keep up the great work
Lusty Stallion
6/23/20, 5:44 AM
Really hot. Not a fan of water works to be honest, but loved the rest of both parts. I love a good wish changing device
Redan
6/23/20, 5:31 AM
This story makes me hella uncomfortable, especially references of people as scum. Given the rest of the imagery in the story, I can only assume that said scum wasn't a white person. Honestly this reads more of a radicalization story than a mind control story.