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6/23/20, 6:26 AM
I remember this one from MCStories! It's still one of my favorites. I know you prefer writing multi-chapter epics, but you're so good at these shorter stories as well.
Anonymous
6/23/20, 6:20 AM
Yeah, I remember this story. It was hot then and it's still hot now. Thanks for sharing.
Lusty Stallion
6/23/20, 5:59 AM
Loved it man. Glad you explained the mechanics situation. Keep up the great work
Lusty Stallion
6/23/20, 5:44 AM
Really hot. Not a fan of water works to be honest, but loved the rest of both parts. I love a good wish changing device
Redan
6/23/20, 5:31 AM
This story makes me hella uncomfortable, especially references of people as scum. Given the rest of the imagery in the story, I can only assume that said scum wasn't a white person. Honestly this reads more of a radicalization story than a mind control story.
MrH
6/23/20, 5:25 AM
hot concept!
6/23/20, 5:22 AM
This was quite hot.
6/23/20, 5:10 AM
Give us a sequel! More action at the police station:)
6/23/20, 4:39 AM
BoSS, The second chapter was as good as, if not better than the first. The way you write about subtle changes in the protagonist always hits the spot. Hopefully, there can be more parts as to the story...
6/23/20, 3:12 AM
OOOOOOOOh that sounds like a very promising story arc! No pressure here, I understand that its tough to write these stories, but if you decide to write that story arc, know that you have at least one supporter over here! Maybe Nate might get even a little jealous when a sired packmate gets too close to his puppy jock soulmate? It certainly has promise.