Recent Comments

6/22/20, 6:42 PM
I enjoyed this chapter and it seemed to be a great start of the black moment in romantic stories. I have enjoyed this whole story completely from start to finish andf get excited when I see a new chapter is up.
6/22/20, 4:50 PM
This desperately needs another chapter
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/22/20, 4:42 PM
I hope they go to college together or at least move to same town & share their own apartment.
6/22/20, 4:40 PM
This is an old story I moved over to GSS, since someone was looking for it.
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:46 PM
very romantic and beautifully written
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:34 PM
He ended up so hard and horny that he would fuck anything!! I've been like that without the drugs!!!
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:24 PM
Ehhhh!! Typical!
6/22/20, 2:10 PM
I admire Nate's resolve. I'd play with the puppy A LOT more. The ending to this chapter made me a little bit sad. I mean, it's a perfectly normal thing to happen after you graduate but the whole soulmate thing makes saying goodbye a lot harder. I hope they figure this out
Anonymous
6/22/20, 12:57 PM
Needs some spelling and grammar cleanup for readability as many sentences run into each other.
6/22/20, 12:22 PM
This story is in desperate need of way more paragraph breaks. It makes it really hard to read without them.