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6/23/20, 2:28 AM
Sure thing, suggestions are always appreciated! And I won't lie, I really did consider the option of Nate turning into a werewolf some time in the future. The thing is, I feel like that would sort of ruin the mind control aspect of the soulmate bond. Dave is also Nate's soulmate, so if he became a werewolf, who would obey who? Would they obey each other or would neither of them obey the other? They would definitely love each other, that's sure. But as far as I can imagine, the "Nate controls Dave's mind and body" part would be gone, probably for good since the werewolf status is permanent. The idea of Dave siring a pack crossed my mind too. Since he's the alpha, would they have to mindlessly do what he says? (If Nate was sired by Dave, would he be obedient to his alpha?). If we combined that with Human!Nate controlling Dave, it would be a pretty nice scenario to see (Nate controlling Dave, who controls the rest of the sired werewolves. Like a "the master of the master" thing or something like that). I'm not saying the story is going there, because I haven't fleshed out the idea enough, nor have I thought about it. But it's indeed a nice turn the story could take somewhere in the future, maybe in a future arc? Who knows :p.
6/23/20, 1:30 AM
If you're open to suggestions and willing to expand Nate and Dave's story, maybe you can explore the idea of Nate being turned into a werewolf? The lore and superpowers of werewolves have not been explored too far in the story, but I'm thinking that the tropes existing in vampire stories might work for this series where the human love interest transforms into a supernatural being as well Again, just an idea, but maybe have Nate go through a life or death situation where the only way he survives is to turn in to a werewolf. And then maybe we can go through another story arc of him dealing with his new status as a werewolf. And who knows, he might end up earning some new soulmate powers (like maybe a soulmate pack where he and Dave could sire a pack of werewolves under their thrall). I think it would be interesting to delve in the werewolf lore of it all
6/22/20, 11:24 PM
> Hey Nacho, do you have a plan of how long the series is going to go? Is there an endgame in sight? To be honest, there doesn’t seem to be a happy ending for these two. For one, Nate will always seem to fear Dave and now they are probably destined to be split apart. My heart can’t handle the impending heartache… > As much as I love writing Nate and Dave, I don't know if I'll be able to extend them for the next monthly story again (Mostly because I already extended their story for five more chapters last month). That being said, Pine's arc is just a few chapters away of being finished, so I could move Nate's story over to that "slot", being able to write them while also making some new stories. One of those would be "The Daylight Club" (The indirect sequel I have planned for William's story), that already had a few 'mentions' here and there, but hasn't seen the daylight yet. *Ba dum tss* There's nothing certain for now though, but I can confirm that Dave will try his best to be with his soulmate no matter the cost. You can count on that😉.
6/22/20, 11:06 PM
Hot story, I do wonder about the "Smoking" tag
6/22/20, 10:35 PM
Great sequel. I hope to read more. Maybe the CDs falling into some other people's hands?
Anonymous
6/22/20, 9:30 PM
You're right. Sorry I submitted it really late at night and copy and paste stripped it of paragraph breaks. I'll see if I have time to re-add them tomorrow
6/22/20, 9:16 PM
You don't write enough stories, man. Because when you do, they are fucking brilliant. THANK YOU.
6/22/20, 8:46 PM
+1 to the above requests! love daddy slaves. best if he serves his master more aside from being a sex slave
Anonymous
6/22/20, 8:27 PM
I really hope to see how uncle turned out after this last wish
Larry
6/22/20, 8:25 PM
another great story, mal. I'm sure there's a part three to follow 😉