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Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:46 PM
very romantic and beautifully written
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:34 PM
He ended up so hard and horny that he would fuck anything!! I've been like that without the drugs!!!
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:24 PM
Ehhhh!! Typical!
6/22/20, 2:10 PM
I admire Nate's resolve. I'd play with the puppy A LOT more. The ending to this chapter made me a little bit sad. I mean, it's a perfectly normal thing to happen after you graduate but the whole soulmate thing makes saying goodbye a lot harder. I hope they figure this out
Anonymous
6/22/20, 12:57 PM
Needs some spelling and grammar cleanup for readability as many sentences run into each other.
6/22/20, 12:22 PM
This story is in desperate need of way more paragraph breaks. It makes it really hard to read without them.
RainOnMe
6/22/20, 11:31 AM
^ I agree. Phil should remember his only purpose is to serve his master. I also think there should be more foot fetish elements involved. As for Michael, he needs to become their new pet puppy. He will forget about his old life and realize that he’s never been happier than to be a good muscular pup. This will teach him not get involved in Phil and Roger’s love life. Have Michael walk on all fours, wear a collar and leash, as well as eat and drink from a dog bowl.
6/22/20, 10:35 AM
I see, thank you, I hope to see the new, gay, uncle
6/22/20, 9:50 AM
I plan on continuing Luke's story with the next few chapters with other people grabbing the coin and making wishes or people passing off the coin to their friends. Might be a couple days for another chapter while I plan it out. I half assed the first couple chapters and I want to do better with each addition :)