Recent Comments

6/22/20, 9:50 AM
I plan on continuing Luke's story with the next few chapters with other people grabbing the coin and making wishes or people passing off the coin to their friends. Might be a couple days for another chapter while I plan it out. I half assed the first couple chapters and I want to do better with each addition :)
6/22/20, 8:29 AM
Nice! I was looking forward to this all week. Looks like we're really setting up the hard, high school couple questions eh? I'm interested to see where this goes. For me though, I want to start seeing Nate actually figure out for himself whether he likes Dave or not. He's been spending so many chapters being wishy washy about it and I would wish that he could just make a decision already. But that's how I feel. Perhaps my favorite parts of the series is when Dave enters that tranced out state whenever he follows commands. I really like tranced out jocks with goofy faces. Anyway, great chapter and I'm glad you're having fun writing these. I don't think its filler at all, but more of a slower paced, set up chapter. Which are always needed
6/22/20, 8:18 AM
oh wow, that's some heavy praise! Glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't sure what you meant regarding links, but if you meant linking my story on another site, then sure, as long as it's credited properly. Thanks for the nice comment!
6/22/20, 8:17 AM
to bad we could not see the city after the last wish, can you add it in later?
6/22/20, 8:03 AM
Oh nice, I've been craving a fat Nerd TF story lately and this hit the spot. I find the idea of you turning into your own insult a neat concept. There's something about someone being turned into their idea of a stereotype that seems just fitting for a revenge story.
Lusty Stallion
6/22/20, 6:14 AM
Loved it. What a great story! I can't believe I missed this one - and from you. I love your stuff man. You're the reason I've started writing
Lusty Stallion
6/21/20, 10:21 PM
Wow. i cant believe an AI wrote as much as you sat. That's imcredible. It had me going
6/21/20, 8:54 PM
fuckin' hot
SubLondon
6/21/20, 6:34 PM
Living this story.
Anonymous
6/21/20, 5:58 PM
Wish we'd see this continued