Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/22/20, 12:57 PM
Needs some spelling and grammar cleanup for readability as many sentences run into each other.
6/22/20, 12:22 PM
This story is in desperate need of way more paragraph breaks. It makes it really hard to read without them.
RainOnMe
6/22/20, 11:31 AM
^ I agree. Phil should remember his only purpose is to serve his master. I also think there should be more foot fetish elements involved. As for Michael, he needs to become their new pet puppy. He will forget about his old life and realize that he’s never been happier than to be a good muscular pup. This will teach him not get involved in Phil and Roger’s love life. Have Michael walk on all fours, wear a collar and leash, as well as eat and drink from a dog bowl.
6/22/20, 10:35 AM
I see, thank you, I hope to see the new, gay, uncle
6/22/20, 9:50 AM
I plan on continuing Luke's story with the next few chapters with other people grabbing the coin and making wishes or people passing off the coin to their friends. Might be a couple days for another chapter while I plan it out. I half assed the first couple chapters and I want to do better with each addition :)
6/22/20, 8:29 AM
Nice! I was looking forward to this all week. Looks like we're really setting up the hard, high school couple questions eh? I'm interested to see where this goes. For me though, I want to start seeing Nate actually figure out for himself whether he likes Dave or not. He's been spending so many chapters being wishy washy about it and I would wish that he could just make a decision already. But that's how I feel. Perhaps my favorite parts of the series is when Dave enters that tranced out state whenever he follows commands. I really like tranced out jocks with goofy faces. Anyway, great chapter and I'm glad you're having fun writing these. I don't think its filler at all, but more of a slower paced, set up chapter. Which are always needed
6/22/20, 8:18 AM
oh wow, that's some heavy praise! Glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't sure what you meant regarding links, but if you meant linking my story on another site, then sure, as long as it's credited properly. Thanks for the nice comment!
6/22/20, 8:17 AM
to bad we could not see the city after the last wish, can you add it in later?
6/22/20, 8:03 AM
Oh nice, I've been craving a fat Nerd TF story lately and this hit the spot. I find the idea of you turning into your own insult a neat concept. There's something about someone being turned into their idea of a stereotype that seems just fitting for a revenge story.