Recent Comments

6/21/20, 1:49 PM
I like the feel of reality, that it could actually happen. The writer is taking me on a journey that keeps me guessing. I like the straight to gay, its always a turn on when they see whats happening but actually seems natural. Looking forward to the next chapter. Good work.
Cracker
6/21/20, 1:28 PM
cum-ing today if they okay it..write me :)
Martin
6/21/20, 12:49 PM
Hot as always. I love the switched perspective. I know it's really hard to do to write a scene from the perspective of a mindless drone (been there, done that). But I think you could improve it a bit. It still sound like a guy pretending to be a mindless drone. There should not be any thought and any kind of self-awareness. Just function. Just pleasure to function.
Anonymous
6/21/20, 12:09 PM
dam this is hot can't wait for part 2 and 3 this is so hot
CF
6/21/20, 8:32 AM
cruel but **entirely** necessary haha enjoyed the unfolding of the whole story - thanks
Anonymous
6/21/20, 5:12 AM
Jo, I love the romance between Phil and Roger it’s so cute! I‘m excited to see more of it, while still keeping the mind control active. Roger has this sexy, muscular, daddy slave and he should have fun with his new toy. It would be hot if daddy slave became Roger’s personal foot stool, bowed whenever his young master stepped into his presence, cooked his meals, cleaned up after him etc. Another kinky idea could be having daddy slave suck his master’s cock and toes while he eats dinner. I want Phil to really SERVE his son/master.
boi98229
6/21/20, 3:56 AM
Wow! *So so hot!* i love hypnosis as a tool for domination, and you used it perfectly! You obviously enjoy hypnosis yourself as your representation of the process is quite detailed and accurate, much more so than many other hypnosis stories. i so agree completely with all the previous wonderful comments -- only more so! It's now one of my favorite stories, and i am off to read other stories you have written to confirm your new status as one of my favorite authors! Do you mind if i post a link or two from another site which also includes erotic hypnosis? i don't write, so the least i can do is help you rightfully grow your readership (if you don't mind, of course, Sir).
6/21/20, 3:13 AM
There is a lot of good material here. Maybe it could be repackaged in a rewrite.
6/21/20, 2:14 AM
Maravilhoso , parabéns !
CLB
6/21/20, 1:34 AM
Thank you you are far too kind… but i'll take it! ;-)