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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/19/20, 1:25 PM
Nice inter racial role play, especially in a wrestling setting, raw & real.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/19/20, 1:20 PM
Feel free to pass along my email address to him. I would love being controlled like that.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/19/20, 1:17 PM
Love no nonsense language, a great nice & raw start for more!
Brendan Shelton
6/19/20, 12:45 PM
Damn, so many unexpected twists. Please keep writing, this series is super hot. I can't wait to read what happens next.
6/19/20, 12:13 PM
you never fail to amuse me. never. I love how you made this. I wish roger will take phil forever! perhaps make him more and more submissive!
6/19/20, 8:52 AM
I love how subtle everything is
6/19/20, 6:47 AM
It's a good mechanic, and has a lot of potential. It seems a little rushed at the end but definitely a hot little story. Hope to see more from you.
6/19/20, 6:06 AM
"You temporarily forget the difference between 2nd person and 1st person narration..."
M.B.Daddy
6/19/20, 5:45 AM
Anyone else was expecting Aaron to be with the ghost of the guy that James had his one night stand with?
6/19/20, 3:28 AM
This is simply a masterful exercise of craft. It was a full narrative, with a great structure, elegantly done. The characters felt distinct and driven by complex emotions. And it was deeply romantic in ways that weren't conventional or cliched. It's just a very cool and confident bit of writing. The world building was handled well too - it didn't feel awkward or exposition heavy and the writing didn't feel mannered or archaic despite managing to feel immersed in its setting. I massively enjoyed it, basically. Thanks for writing it and I hope you write a lot more stuff in as many different genres as possible. It was so cool to see a well-written and multi dimensional female character too. i guess for obvious reasons to do with the focus of the site any women often get a bit sidelined. I really appreciated how much more expansive and textured the story felt for including her and giving her a perspective.