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6/19/20, 6:47 AM
It's a good mechanic, and has a lot of potential. It seems a little rushed at the end but definitely a hot little story. Hope to see more from you.
6/19/20, 6:06 AM
"You temporarily forget the difference between 2nd person and 1st person narration..."
M.B.Daddy
6/19/20, 5:45 AM
Anyone else was expecting Aaron to be with the ghost of the guy that James had his one night stand with?
6/19/20, 3:28 AM
This is simply a masterful exercise of craft. It was a full narrative, with a great structure, elegantly done. The characters felt distinct and driven by complex emotions. And it was deeply romantic in ways that weren't conventional or cliched. It's just a very cool and confident bit of writing. The world building was handled well too - it didn't feel awkward or exposition heavy and the writing didn't feel mannered or archaic despite managing to feel immersed in its setting. I massively enjoyed it, basically. Thanks for writing it and I hope you write a lot more stuff in as many different genres as possible. It was so cool to see a well-written and multi dimensional female character too. i guess for obvious reasons to do with the focus of the site any women often get a bit sidelined. I really appreciated how much more expansive and textured the story felt for including her and giving her a perspective.
6/19/20, 2:36 AM
Wonderful! Love how each of his wishes went wrong. You are quite talented, do more plssss
CLB
6/19/20, 2:03 AM
As someone who has a side that fantasizes about being humiliated / denigrated, i enjoyed the story quite a bit Thanks for sharing it
Seattle Dom4MuscleSub
6/19/20, 2:03 AM
Continue the story. His boyfriend has started wishing, so now he has to end up as a big, muscular, furry bottom. Tiny dick, big muscles, furry, and a belly. just like his top likes.
nycboot
6/19/20, 1:43 AM
slave abdamelek: I love the statement because it shows the slave mindset, for example, that servitude is liberation. I've known quite a few slaves whose lives were kinda messed up, and their Masters took over and set them on a good path. So in that context, being controlled for one's own protection is a recognition of the slave ethos. So what makes the quote amusing and ironic is that the character challenges that statement - clearly he is going to discover what control is. A great way to foreshadow.
6/19/20, 1:34 AM
What an awesome story!
6/19/20, 1:30 AM
Enjoy the unique deceptive ploys in sending the reader along with the character